FAN FICTION POST: "Precious", part 6 (Queer As Folk)

[flowrs4ophelia]

Title: Precious
Author: flowrs4ophelia
Rating: R
Characters/Pairings: Brian/Justin
Summary: Too many times it has taken some kind of tragedy to bring Justin and Brian closer together.
Previous chapters: Prologue | I | II | III | IV | V
Notes: Does it ever seem to you like the only time you really feel like doing something like work on fanfic is when you don't

Comments

[rosacurry]

this is really an amazing story. so well-written, and it feels like I'm inside brian's brain all the time. beautiful, can't wait to read more.

[suzvoy]

siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh

Wonderful!

[herefordroad]

brian's initial confrontation with craig demonstrated something interesting...brian's desire to make sure craig knows about justin's success. and you can feel brian's pride

[kimberbaby]

Justin saw how awe-struck he looked standing there looking at his newborn child, and how he seemed almost scared when he took him into his arms and held him so carefully. Someone like him scared by such a tiny little thing; he never would have thought. It was the same way when he handled Justin later that night; he was so surprisingly gentle and careful, making it strange to remember later how nervous and afraid he had been before. And Justin realized he was not what he appeared to be at first, what he perhaps wanted to be. He was just a man. He was human, and felt things the same way anybody else did. And maybe he needed someone to help him realize that himself.

I love this more with each chapter you unveil. *claps*

[kimberbaby]

In the very center is a framed drawing of her looking no older than eight that he can tell must have been drawn by Justin even though he’s never seen it before.

:(((( Oh, poor Jester.

“Justin. Hey...” He wraps one arm around his chest as his first sob comes out and he covers his face with both of his hands. Brian isn’t really aware of what he says to him when he says it; maybe he just says, “It’s okay,” but whatever it is allows Justin to completely let go, and all at once his legs seem to completely lose their strength as he collapses back against him and Brian is practically holding him up from behind. They sink to the floor together, Brian holding him so tightly around his chest it is like he’s trying to hold all his pieces together as his back shakes. And there they are curled together again, maybe not healing yet this time, but feeling what has to be felt and not carrying it around alone anymore.

Seriously. :(((