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FIC POST: "Dear Darkness" part 3B/6 (Supernatural)

Feb 06, 2011 20:37

( This is possibly the weirdest and most completely unpredictable social moment of his life... )

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Comments 7

laindenver February 9 2011, 02:22:40 UTC

This story is wonderfully intense. This chapter really surprised me in some ways- now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what's next! Great plotting and writing!

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flowrs4ophelia February 10 2011, 20:32:11 UTC

Thank you! As fast as I can work on it... :)

katsheswims February 9 2011, 04:37:27 UTC

Poor Dean. I feel so bad for him. But things turn out alright in the end. (or at least they're going okay so far).

Keep up the good work!!

ninety6tears February 9 2011, 09:34:51 UTC

I have to admit that of all the question raised in previous chapters the one I was totally on the edge of my seat about was what the hell happened with Dean and robo-Sam and this is pretty much like I expected and yet...somehow more appalling that I expected. In the most kinky way imaginable. What really makes the scene work is how it's coming after how Dean and Sam are dealing with remembering it later, so that when it comes up it's more like there are three characters in the room and there's this sub-textual sense that Sam is basically violating himself as well as screwing with Dean.

flowrs4ophelia February 10 2011, 20:38:47 UTC

The crazy thing is I wasn't sure for a long time where in the fic I was actually going to have that last conversation with them in the car. When I realized this installment was going to be way too long for one entry anyway I kind of impulsively added it in right before the flashback as a sort of transition into it and was like Uh, I guess it kind of works here... Apparently yeah. LOL.

secondplatypus February 15 2011, 00:11:40 UTC

That sex scene was so many different flavors of wrong-hot, I'm still trying to sort them out.
The detail that really made it for me, though, was Dean telling Sam not to kiss him. No matter what, these boys have always loved each other, and that lack of intimacy gave what happened between Dean and Robo-Sam such a hideously empty quality - desire fulfilled without any feeling, such a stark contrast to the sweet little scene between them at Stanford.
I love this. I love, love, love, love, LOVE this, and I want more so badly I can barely stand it.

*waits as patiently as she can*

flowrs4ophelia February 15 2011, 20:08:29 UTC

Thanks so much for your comments! :D Glad you're enjoying it so far. *gets back to writing more as fast as I can*