FIC POST: "Dear Darkness" part 1/6 (Supernatural)

[flowrs4ophelia]

Title: Dear Darkness
Author: Sara (flowrs4ophelia)
Characters & Pairings: Sam/Dean, Soulless!Sam/Dean, Castiel, Balthazar (briefly), Bobby
Rating: hard R (eventually)
Summary: With a little support from Cas that comes in a strange form, Sam may be able to keep his memories of the cage suppressed. But everything his soulless self lived through are memories he's

Comments

[katsheswims]

Wow. This is wonderful.

The feel of it is just very Supernatural-esque. I think you captured Sam and Dean perfectly. And this feels like it would fit right in with the plot.

Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more!!

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thank you! I've never written SPN before and I'm not really used to these characters' voices and all, so I'm glad to hear it feels pretty canon-consistent. :)

[beatlemaniac9]

Oh, wow...this piece is so powerful! I truly cannot wait for you to post the next part!

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thanks, glad you're liking it!

[muggy69]

I REALLY LIKE THIS . ITS SO TRUE TO THERE SELF. ITS LIKE I'M IN THE CAR WITH THEM OR YOU WERE AND YOU JUST WROTE WHAT WAS GOING ON IN THERE WORLD. LOL WELL I GUESS YOU WERE. BUT YOU DID SUCH A GREAT JOB OF REALLY GETTING THEM HERE FOR US TO BE APART OF THERE LIVES . CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST. XXOXOXOOXO

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thank you. :D

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thank you!

(Aha, now I think I recognize your username from the Twilight days. :D)

[jasmineisland]

Really powerful. Love the images it produces. That green army guy in the ashtray bringing it all back just like it did in Swan Song.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thanks so much. :)