FANFIC POST: "The Persistence of Gravity" part 3/4 (Twilight)

Dec 23, 2009 16:02

Title: The Persistence of Gravity
[ Part I][ Part II]
Author: Sara (paintedponyxox@flowrs4ophelia)
Characters & Pairings: Sam/Leah, some Sam/Emily
Rating: R
Summary: His father was a complete screw-up who hurt and abandoned everyone who needed him, but he tries very hard to be a good kid, a good student, a good friend and son. And he swears to himself as he watches Leah ( Read more... )

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ninety6tears December 26 2009, 20:45:52 UTC
When I knew that this fic was going to merge into his relationship with Emily a little bit, I seriously wondered how the hell you were going to...do that. And I'm kind of floored by how you illustrated this monumental change in the way that Sam is able to see things because of him imprinting, and aside from the best parts with Leah I think some of those descriptions are the strongest points in the story. You manage to do all that without showing any kind of evaluation of whether this sudden change is necessarily good or bad; Sam kind of acknowledges how disturbing it is that he can't be objective, but it can't make him any more objective. But his character is still sympathetic rather than becoming something of a drone, and I honestly wonder if any other writer has ever tackled and portrayed imprinting through such a sensitive lens as this.

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wreckofdreams January 2 2010, 00:50:56 UTC
I have never been a fan of Sam in the series but the way you describe and illustrate him is remarkable. I loved the way you wrote the end and how you intertwined Emily into the story.

try to keep something in mind every time you make me another promise? I'll probably always believe you

Favorite line.

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flowrs4ophelia January 3 2010, 03:35:20 UTC
Thanks very much. :)

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mizz_britain August 8 2010, 07:05:21 UTC
You might be interested in writing for my site First Light. It's an Interactive Fan Fiction Site. Same concept as regular fiction but the story is written with your name as the main character, you can also add friends and other elements to the story. I have Twilight, Taylor Lautner, Jonas Brothers, Justin Bieber and General stories on there now. Just email me if your interested

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