FANFIC POST: "Aerilon Girls Are Easy" part 2/5 (Battlestar Galactica)

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Title: Aerilon Girls Are Easy
Author: Sara C. (flowrs4ophelia)
Characters & Pairings: Lee/Kara(/Zak)
Rating: R
Summary: Without a war to bring them back together, it takes a lot for Kara and Lee to be able to forgive each other. And themselves.
Previous parts: Part I
Notes: Thank you for all the lovely comments so far, sorry I haven't responded to them! And no,

Comments

[callmeonetrack]

Ooh yikes! The angst snuck up on me completely!!

Nice how Kara still has the worst timing, bringing up Zak's death like that.

Good job BB! Ready for more, more, more!

[elzed]

Oh, man, that last para!!!!

This is fab. Really. I love it. Great premise, excellent writing, and totally gripping. WANT MORE PLS.

[enots]

Killer chapter. Absolutely brilliant characterisations.

Lee's voice comes out sounding strangely detached and unconscious, and suddenly deeply sad. "Did we kill him?" he says quietly. "Did we...sometimes...want him out of the way?"

Wow. What a sucker-punch of a line. Cannot wait for her answer.

[gwassh0ppa]

Beautiful and angsty and I looooove it. Great work! I imagine real soon, she'll figure out how to tell him what happened. Oh that's going to be a firey display. Woo.

[rdave1]

Lords, it went from three happy stooges to very angsty pilots. Lee and Kara blame themselves for Zak death both in different ways but they need to learn that it was an accident. I am curious as to why Lee is not a good guy.

Great chapter.