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flowerofsin

(FIC) Months and Hours

Apr 25, 2009 21:09

Title: Months and Hours
Rating: PG
Pairing: Edward/Sally
Word Count: 597
Prompt: 'Hate is too strong a word'
Summary: Written for Daily Prompt over on Dreamwidth. Long after their tryst, Sally is left pregnant and with her thoughts.

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Comments 9

lykeleia April 26 2009, 05:40:09 UTC

OMG, amazing.

Last line(s) slayed me of course.

She mused on how there were still some certainties in her life, like whether she could love this child or not. It was the reason why that made her hands tremble.

Uuugghhhhh. Sooo good, so sad.

Wish I could be a little more coherent, but it is late and I am exhausted.

Fab, as always. I'd always hoped more fics like this would crop up... about Sally musing when she was pregnant, just because the circumstances are complex for her.

Lovely job.

flowerofsin April 29 2009, 19:39:19 UTC

Thank you so much! I like trying to make sense of Sally's thoughts.

lady_s April 26 2009, 20:37:37 UTC

I really liked this. What a wodnerufl insight into Sally.

flowerofsin April 29 2009, 19:40:37 UTC

Thank you! I really should do more fic focused on Sally, I think.

makeslashnotwar April 30 2009, 06:45:33 UTC

I read this the day you posted it but forgot to leave a comment. (and seeing Eddie/Mary Sue makes my heart bleed (in a bad way) so I had to come back here and read good fic. :D)
You know I love how you write both Eddie and Sally and I think they make a perfect, contrary team (if that makes any sense).
Heartbreaking and well-written - just the way it's supposed to be ;)

I'd love to see more Sally fic :)

flowerofsin April 30 2009, 16:23:21 UTC

I'm glad you liked this one. Heh, I think I know the fic(s) you're talking about. I'm tempted to write some kind of crazy Sue fic just for the hell of it, but I'm afraid some folks will think I'm serious.

I'm going to try to write a couple of short ficlets or one-shots with Sally. I have so many things I need to finish!

makeslashnotwar April 30 2009, 17:50:53 UTC

Yeah, that one's hard to miss. And here was me fearing my Eddie fic would be regarded as too Sue-y.

I'm tempted to write some kind of crazy Sue fic just for the hell of it
Okay, now I totally want to read that. It needs to happen :D

tehprincessj May 3 2009, 06:12:49 UTC

Touching. I absolutely adore Sally/The Comedian. Such a messed-up broken pairing, but so beautiful, too, in a way. This was a nice look into all the fear and doubt strong Sally must have felt during her pregnancy. I enjoyed reading it, and hope to see more Sally from you soon. ♥

monalily May 12 2009, 05:25:22 UTC

I love this short but in depth perspective on Sally. Saddie is so angsty and bittersweet. I love how you write them.