Comments | flowerofsin: (FIC) Issues of Control

flowerofsin

(FIC) Issues of Control

Mar 24, 2009 22:35

Title: Issues of Control
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Hooded Justice/The Comedian, Hooded Justice/Captain Metropolis/The Comedian
Word Count: 3,030
Warnings: Non-con, bondage, and a dab of violence
Summary: Minutemen era smut. Hooded Justice decides that the Comedian could benefit from his expertise. Nelson ends up joining in.

( Choices always were a problem for you. What you need is someone strong to guide you... )

watchmen:characters:hooded justice, watchmen, watchmen:pairing:hooded justice/comedian, watchmen:characters:captain metropolis, fan works:fan fiction, watchmen:characters:the comedian

Comments 27

serenity_winner March 25 2009, 03:03:39 UTC

YES

YES YES YES

And. Oh god yes. The way you write HJ is TOP NOTCH, I am just grinning like a douche. And the bickering and Nelly's inner conflict ALSO TOP NOTCH. And then of course HOW CAN I SAY NO TO EDDIE GETTING RAPED BY MY OTP.

I love you. You go places few other writers do.

flowerofsin March 25 2009, 04:02:04 UTC

Ha ha, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had intended to do something like this for a while and finally kicked myself in the butt to do it. To be honest, this is probably my Watchmen OT3. And I like mistreating Blake a little. He deserves it, anyway, so I feel less guilty about my fetish for Blake abuse.

soda_and_capes March 25 2009, 03:24:17 UTC

. . . I was just thinking about how very much I wanted to read this pairing not half an hour ago. WAY TO GO, DUDE. And it's fucking brilliant. Ohgod, poor faily precious Nelson. And Eddie is such a tiny douchebag! FAVORITE. Also, ohman, so few stories have actual awesome HJ character-study stuff, and he's such a crazy fucker in this. I am seriously fond.

flowerofsin March 25 2009, 04:03:41 UTC

I'm glad you had fun reading it! I have a soft spot for HJ, so I felt like I needed to write him again.

quietprofanity March 25 2009, 03:37:02 UTC

Awww, poor Nelson. He never catches a break ... except he kind of does. That was fun.

flowerofsin March 25 2009, 04:04:23 UTC

Ha ha. I'm glad you liked it.

flwrpwr_vampyre March 25 2009, 03:47:37 UTC

Ngh... Is it wrong to ask for more of them hurting him? Because I'd love to see the twisted shit they do to him.

Anyways, this is so so hot! I love Eddie begging not to come, the proud bastard. And HJ interrupting his punishment to fuck him, so HOT!

flowerofsin March 25 2009, 04:06:53 UTC

Hey, I don't see anything wrong with that! I might try writing a sequel to this after I finish a little something else (that is long overdue *sob*). Glad you enjoyed it. I tried to make it as steamy as I could.

vangogh March 25 2009, 04:08:30 UTC

HOT AS ALL HELL. I have such a thing for these three together, and I'm happy to see I'm not the only one. Eddie needs to be taught a lesson and the way he didn't want to come and yet he couldn't help it, like feeling pleasure was sheer torture - that was just way too hot for words. Gah. Your characterization of HJ made me squee. He was just perfect. Nelson broke my heart a little during the bickering and d'aww, their relationship is so perfectly fucked up. ♥

I would definitely not say no to more of this. The world needs so much more of this OT3. Awesome job!

flowerofsin March 25 2009, 20:45:34 UTC

Thanks so much! I have a thing for Blake getting punished/abused in some way, so it makes me think up far too many scenarios. I think I might need to do a follow-up or something to this one.