seattle rain - 1/1

[florentineeggs]

seattle rain: a character study. (gen)
3 443 words. pg.
◦ with prompted inspiration from kpopficwank

life goes on, even after natural disasters.

Comments

[countingcarbs]

oh bb.

if i could quote your whole story i would.

just. OW.

that was so painful and lovely and introspective. and lovely. and gah. see? this is why i only read your things nowadays!

[florentineeggs]

:) :) :) that would be a hella long comment just btw ♥

you can't read only my fic omg ; ; there are other good 2pm fics out there! have you tried digging through coolsexydoode? jackpot x 832974

ilu. tysm and i'm not going to apologise for the way that this hurt because that's exactly what i set out to do :) ♥

[countingcarbs]

i know, but this fic was just so lovely and real and wonderful and yes, like total closure from all the crap that is going around and can i say i lovelovelove your Jay because he's just so. jay. <33 *spazz*

haha i haven't. i haven't even been keeping up with dbsk! D: fails. i'm so bored i've actually turned to merlin and spn. :D

you don't have to. it wouldn't be this awesome any other way. it was just what i needed to read i think. :D

[florentineeggs]

lkjald that is GOOD a jay should always sound like a jay ;) i'm glad this gave you closure about the whole mess ♥

i haven't up in dbsk in forever too omg :( except for a few writers here and there, but other than that i've kind of stepped back from it. what's spn?

♥♥ GOOD :)

[callherblondie]

*sits back and takes a deep breath

[florentineeggs]

i. wow. i'm oh my god i'm blushing like an idiot right now. thank you so so so much for taking the time to write this. your feedback was not inadequate in any way and you were so detailed and thoughtful with it that i'm honestly grinning and blushing and trying not to bury my face into hands and start laughing. i don't even know where to start replying to this.

you are so eloquent, and i feel like a bumbling fool right now. thank you. thank you thank you thank you. are you a writer too? because honestly i can't imagine anyone being this well spoken and careful and not writing i wish i could just show you how insanely giddy and happy i am because of your comment. and by the way, yes, yes, and exactly to your statement about dreams, consequences, and promises unfulfilled. that was exactly what i'd been trying to show, and i'd wracked my brains all night in fear that it wouldn't be obvious enough. i can't believe someone picked up on it and even better, someone enjoyed it. thank you

[callherblondie]

I'm so pleased that my feedback made you happy because it was the least I could do for all the happiness and enjoyment you gave me by writing this story, writing these people, and doing so in a way that was such an honor to all of them. It's stories like this that make me grateful to have found kpop fandom and fanfic; seriously, what a pleasure and thank you so much for sharing it.

that was exactly what i'd been trying to show, and i'd wracked my brains all night in fear that it wouldn't be obvious enough.I think that's the true emotional power of this story, the restraint and lack of obvious dramatic reaching that some written work can extend to that turns it into dramatis vulgaris. It's the exploration of weighty, deep, human themes we can all relate to, but doing so in a manner that allows the reader to piece it together for himself/herself. Whether intentionally or not (it doesn't really matter either way), what you've effectively done with this story by not beating us over the head with these important dramatic themes and not

[florentineeggs]

um you're welcome a lot :') thank you tons for the super thoughtful feedback! ♥

i feel like you're giving me too much credit now omg. i. geez i'm just so speechless and happy and flattered and i'm not quite sure how to respond anymore other than with thirty thousand thank yous and you make me so so so happys. ♥♥ seriously, thank you.

i think you made me feel prouder of this than anything else! :) i had no idea that my writing had that sort of effect on the reader, but i'm so glad that it does manage to appeal to so many levels for you ♥

i definitely will now omg :') i look forward to another one of your comments when that time comes!

(don't worry, you'll find that i'm not a very frequent writer either :') life gets in the way, it happens to everyone ♥)

[florentineeggs]

incoherency is a special type of wonderful, and i'm glad it caused that in you ♥ if you have constructive criticism once you've found your words again, i'd love to hear it! what's a writer without improvement? :)

thank you ♥♥ the whole point of this was to inspire some good hurt and if you've felt it, then i've accomplished my goal :) thank you again for taking the time to comment! ♥

[misschatelle]

OMG.

I wish I had enough brain cells right to tell you how much this is awesome and great and perfect and wonderful and what not.

Sadly, my brain is dead.
Need sleep.

But I needed to leave a comment.
I just... needed to.

[florentineeggs]

sleep well! :)

your comment has been received and processed and is being grinned at ♥ you've expressed the feelings of awesome and greatness and perfection and wonderful-ness just fine, and a million thanks for it! ♥♥ i'm glad it made you want to leave a comment even though you didn't know why, just. yeah it's nice, i don't really know why either :)

[ramunerain]

this. was. just. amazing. ;~;
the way you portrayed Jay & his thoughts and everyone was just, wow.
i could quote the whole fic but then this will turn into one hell of a lengthy comment. ♥

i look forward to more of your fics in the future. (:

[florentineeggs]

it would! :') but thank you so much nonetheless ♥♥

please do so! :) :) they're coming, i promise.