Flatsharing (5/?)

Jul 30, 2011 22:51

Title: Flat-sharing (5/?) -part 1-

Genre: Romance, with attemps of wittyness and humour.

Word count: 5440.

Rating: (for this chapter) PG-13 (brief mentions of sexy bussiness, but not much). It will reach NC17, I swear.

Pairings: Kurt/Puck.

Disclaimer: not mine. I cry myself to sleep every night because of this.

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lil_miss_choc July 31 2011, 00:25:47 UTC
I love this so very much! This bit especially was fabulous:

I think I shouldn’t have tried to sing Satisfaction, my throat hurts after trying to pull off that hoarse funky voice. I’m obviously not prepared for anything lower than a chipmunk.”
“Hey, you killed it.”
“And then it killed my vocal folds in retaliation.”

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flordesangre July 31 2011, 10:57:02 UTC
Haha, their jam session was so much fun to write xD I try to sing Satisfaction from time to time, and it stabs my throat every single time :( Can't sing with a hoarse sexy voice...

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lil_miss_choc July 31 2011, 16:20:50 UTC
I'm assuming you mean the Stones' song, not another version?

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flordesangre July 31 2011, 17:09:23 UTC
Oops, nope, I mean Otis Redding's (I don't really like the Stones, but they do good songs - for other people to perform).

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way_to_the_end July 31 2011, 00:55:16 UTC
Oh Kurt is so sweet! It's really great that even though he's not a religious person, he tried his best to make Puck feel at home!

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flordesangre July 31 2011, 10:58:38 UTC
Yeah, I thought that the Kurt we saw in Grilled Cheesus was kind of immature, and that maybe with the time he had probably stopped being so defensive with other people's religious shenanigans. Idk, I would like to make Puck happy if I lived with him...

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christmasdeer August 2 2011, 09:03:07 UTC
I really love this story! But updates happen so rarely. This piece is very small. : ( I'm pretty sure that a couple of missed commas which beta corrects are not worth months of expectations! Forgive me for the molestation, I just so excited about this bromans between two housemates)

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flordesangre August 2 2011, 16:07:07 UTC
Oh, don't despair, love, there's a part 2 that follows this one :D
I'm glad you like it so much, I'm sorry I can't update sooner, but you see, I worry a lot about my writing, since I'm spanish and my english without corrections sucks a lot :|

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christmasdeer August 2 2011, 18:36:45 UTC
I'm russian, so English is not my first language either, and we probably make the same mistakes - so you can just send the un-betaed text to my email! : D I'm afraid to spend my life awaiting т_т

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flordesangre August 2 2011, 22:43:21 UTC
Oh, love... I'll do my best so I can update sooner, ok? Hugs!

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kirke_novak August 2 2011, 13:47:31 UTC
This is getting better and better with every chapter. Now even Burt is scheming to get them together - in a metaphorical sense, of course.

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flordesangre August 2 2011, 16:08:13 UTC
hahahaha, glad you like it! If Burt knew... Puck already has the shivers thinking about it.

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