Fic: "Breaking the Seal" (Petunia/Percy, long, adult)

[florahart]

Now that reveals are up...

Title: Breaking the SealRating: NC-17 in the end, though most of the fic is not about sex

Comments

[true_masquerade]

This is such a fascinating look at the wizarding world through Petunia's eyes. I've seen others, but they tend not to be as positive or as explored as fully.

I almost skipped over it, as the pairing sounded so odd. But I'm very glad I had faith in your writing skills (which should, in fact, never be doubted!). And really it's about 80% with a little bit of Petunia/Percy at the end. Oh dear, I hope that didn't sound like a criticism, just an observation. Because I loved it! You have done such a fantastic job of developing a whole host of minor characters like Augusta, Arabella and Vernon, not only the pairing.

[florahart]

No, I know--I even said in the header that it's really not a particularly porny thing, because it's really, really not. But yes, i had a lot of fun with almost entirely minor characters--Harry's present for just a handful of scenes, and Neville for a couple, but else it's Petunia and her older-women peers quite a lot, and Filius and then Percy. :D

I'm glad you liked it.

[true_masquerade]

Oh dear! I meant to write it's about 80% Gen in my comment above. You worked out what I was trying say, but I thought I'd clarify anyway (g)

[mav1s7466]

Much appreciated