Comments | florahart: And for today's what in the HELL? post:

florahart

And for today's what in the HELL? post:

Apr 04, 2004 23:06

So this started with my spin teacher griping (in a not-mean way) that I wrote the step teacher a poem and didn't write her one. Well--the step teacher was sick and I wrote her a limerick; the spin teacher had a birthday....anyway. So I was thinking about verse, and I was also thinking about the continuing darkfic month over at the_pimp_cane and I was also ( Read more... )

femmeslash, hermione, all fic, poem-fic, dark, rare-pair

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tehlils April 4 2004, 23:23:34 UTC

That is hot! And guh! I love it. And it's a lot better than I have ever done with villanelle.

florahart April 5 2004, 08:28:16 UTC

Thanks, dear. I did manage to then write a better one (not porny because, um, no) for the spin teacher's birthday, so that's something.

;D

tehlils April 5 2004, 08:29:10 UTC

Woot! XD

waraitai April 4 2004, 23:50:08 UTC

I really love how you expressed all of what had been/is happening with only 19 short lines! It's really good, not awful at all!

*fangirls*

Ashleigh

florahart April 5 2004, 08:29:19 UTC

Thanks. :D

anjenue April 5 2004, 01:53:05 UTC

That's so incredible. I've never, ever seen something quite like this before. Just...wow. Guh.

florahart April 5 2004, 08:30:25 UTC

Well. That's a nice comment. :D

jadarene April 5 2004, 02:54:54 UTC

It's good. It is really, really good! So much emotion from your poem. Especially the line about the 'wife who would be.' God, it just gets your heart, you know? Very nice job. :)

florahart April 5 2004, 08:31:32 UTC

Oh, thanks. I'm better with limericks, (hee).

jadarene April 5 2004, 16:42:26 UTC

Are you? Let's see them! I like limericks (obviously). Whip 'em out! :D