Comments | florachan: Ficlet: "At dawn" - Harmodios and Aristogeiton.

florachan

Ficlet: "At dawn" - Harmodios and Aristogeiton.

Oct 10, 2005 22:51

This is the offspring of another challenge at "eros athanatos".
The challenge was to write a short ficlet inspired to the quote by Nietzsche: "When you stare into the abyss, the abyss stares at you."Rules: The piece had to be between 100 and 200 words (not a word longer), and the quote must appear into the ficlet. Whatever character, whatever ( Read more... )

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ailes_de_verre October 10 2005, 14:17:13 UTC

E' cosi bella Flora...le parole che hai usato mi hanno toccato tantissimo,anche se ormai l'ho letta un po di volte,eppure scuote sempre qualcosa in me,l'immagine dell'acqua 'viscida' è impagabile. Tu sei un dono per il mondo Flora,sul serio,anche se a volte sul serio penso che tu sia *troppo* bella per questo mondo.Grazie ancora per un'altro pezzettino di bellezza pura,non smettere mai di scrivere :)

florachan October 10 2005, 16:21:26 UTC

Mia dolcissima sorella, perché mi dici cose che mi fanno sentire così indegna, ma al contempo così felice?
Perché vedi, non penso affatto di essre troppo bella per questo mondo (ma quando mai?), tuttavia mi scalda il cuore sapere che tu lo pensi.
Ti abbraccio.

ailes_de_verre October 11 2005, 00:06:43 UTC

Indegna,tu? Quel giorno deve ancora venire ( e non verrà mai te lo assicuro)E se ti faccio sentire felice...non è a questo che servono le sorelle,anceh se un pò sceme? Ed è solo l'infinitesima parte di come mi fai sentire tu :)
Ti abbraccio anch'io

carolina30363 October 10 2005, 15:56:53 UTC

Poetry, pure poetry.

florachan October 10 2005, 16:15:35 UTC

Thank you hun. I'm so glad you read it. :)

japanpeterpan October 10 2005, 16:00:27 UTC

My heart started beating faster reading this. Love the imagery! ♥!

florachan October 10 2005, 16:18:21 UTC

Awwww, thank you.
In just 200 words it wasn't easy to throw some good images. I'm glad they worked for you.

(and btw, did I already tell you how much I freaking miss you? Why do you have to live on the other side of the known world? *sighs*)

japanpeterpan October 11 2005, 09:15:57 UTC

I miss you too. Graduate school is so hard, and the weather is bad, and... I wish I could just vacation in Italy with you forever ;__;

ryu356 October 10 2005, 23:54:25 UTC

Sono contenta di vedere che l'hai tradotto e postato ^_^
Ora scappo a francese.
Buona giornata Kles

florachan October 11 2005, 15:49:34 UTC

Grazie philé. Sai cosa il tuo giudizio significhi per me.

fatalit October 13 2005, 14:49:36 UTC

I'm entranced with your writing, you know that. It's charming, and impressive - your echoing motives and images, voices and feelings from the past entwining into the feelings of the things to come. Great.
the translation's posted here: http://www.diary.ru/~Phai-land/?comments&postid=7851966, I hope you still don't mind.
I still had no time (moving house is really a disaster!) to read "Fallen Embers" and I'm sorry for that, I hope I'll soon have and hour free to read, and adore it, and meditate upon it ^^

florachan October 13 2005, 15:20:40 UTC

Thank you my dear, and I thank you again for your translations of my pieces. You know they are always welcomed, and I alwyas feel honoured and amazed by the fact you devote your time to do that.
Hope everything will settle for good after your move - so maybe you'll have the time to translate something yours too. I miss your writing, and I'll be waiting for it.
*hugs you*