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Revision Session - Part Six

Jul 13, 2009 10:25

( Part Six )

Comments 30

skuzzeh July 13 2009, 11:28:12 UTC

LOL

How funny.
I absolutely adored that.
The ending was hilarious.

I did cringe at the Effy bit though, after remembering Keiran was there.

Haha, loved it. <3.

thecon12 July 13 2009, 11:35:48 UTC

Jesus the tension ;) Best I've read for ages!

And I love Gina... that is all :D

west_ryder July 13 2009, 12:05:05 UTC

Just how cute and adorable are these two?! I've said it before but this build up is just brilliant. I love this fic - sod work, get writing :) :)

queenbellevue July 13 2009, 12:05:20 UTC

omg, hahaha, I absolutely LOVED this chapter. I dont think I've read anything non-smutty-ish that's hotter so mega mega kudos to u *standing ovation*

silver_lining27 July 13 2009, 12:15:49 UTC

Oh this was great! *sighs*
I've been waiting for this ever since the last chapter!
I just about died laughing at Gina and Kieran during dinner.
And of course, I loved how Naomi couldn't follow the "look but don't touch" rule. It was amazing! :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON! =d