LJ Idol Week 22: Turn Back Or Forge Ahead?

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Comments

[eternal_ot]

It did give me a sense of redemption as well :) I loved the progression and the message this has. Well written!

[i_17bingo]

Very cool. Very full of hope and strength. And very alive. I enjoyed reading this a lot.

[bleodswean]

You really gave him the perseverance he needed, but there is still sadness in his journey. A thoughtful piece!

[beeker121]

I love that Churchill quote "If you're going through hell, keep going." This has the feel of a fable to it, and I like that our protagonist isn't entirely good, but had the strength to get up and move.

[rayaso]

Really wonderful! I loved this! You set it up so well, raising all sorts of questions, and then you had that marvelous ending. Your writing was very crisp and the story moved right along. This was great!