to be a fool, Harry/Louis, NC-17

Oct 13, 2012 18:06

to be a fool
Harry/Louis, NC-17
pining, size/height difference kink
9 156 words

♥ to violentfires and imagination55 for the wonderful beta, to randominity for her encouragement, and to dangerbears because she requested Harry/Louis, height kink fic forever ago (sorry it took so long!).

It strikes him now, oddly, that he’s never before noticed the height of Louis’ shoulders compared to his own ( Read more... )

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imagination55 October 13 2012, 16:19:07 UTC

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flimsy October 14 2012, 13:00:22 UTC
♥♥♥!!!
Again, thank you so much for your help! And I'm so happy you liked it. I've been in such a Harry/Louis mood again lately, so this will definitely not be the last time I write them for *_* boys!

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imagination55 October 14 2012, 14:06:11 UTC
Pfft no problem! My brain has a split personality - half of it is desperate to get back to Harry/Louis but Nick/Louis is taking up the other half and bullying the other two into submission (this current porny escapade will be the longest yet...). :/ BUT I'm glad to say that I have no such restrictions on reading. Starting to think I just ship Louis/Everyone tbh.

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babygotbass October 13 2012, 18:43:33 UTC
I do not think this very often when I read a fic - but I really want this fic from Louis' point of view. How long ago did he notice Harry getting taller? How many times did he notice Harry's hands, or his height when he actually stood up straight. And how long has Lou wanted those hands to cover his?

UUUUUUGH. You are killing me with Louis feelings today. That Nick/Louis tumblr ficlet is killer.

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flimsy October 14 2012, 13:01:19 UTC
Eeh, thank you so much :D I'm glad you liked them both!

Man, that fic from Louis' POV would be killer - he's sort of oblivious? But also not? And he's so, so hurt just towards the end when Harry keeps saying that he's drunk :(

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hejhej123 October 14 2012, 00:38:19 UTC
Wow this is so good! For me it seems like you have portrayed Louis and Harry's relationship spot on. The build up was amazing, I don't even know what to write! Brilliant!

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flimsy October 14 2012, 13:01:27 UTC
Thank you so much!

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mowglimoonshado October 14 2012, 01:41:06 UTC
I am now DEAD. I hope you are happy. All the feelings!

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flimsy October 14 2012, 13:01:38 UTC
SORRY! :D And thank you!!

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shrdmdnssftw October 14 2012, 15:13:14 UTC
I think I may have said this, but I really, really love the way you write, and this was so brilliant. I am so in love with height/size difference, and just the way that you had Harry slowly realise that he was too, it grabbed me and kind of made me love this fic even more. This was just so, so good, and I really enjoyed reading it! :)

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