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flimsy

shook my bones (three times)

Jul 02, 2012 00:00

shook my bones (three times)
gen with allusions
2,149 words

♥ to clarinetkate for the prompt beta and lookingatstars for concrit and handholding!

Three post-tour vignettes

( “I know,” Louis says. Liam can almost see him smile. “Do you miss us? We miss you. Niall is staying at Zayn’s and I think they’re about to get terrible tummies because of their McDonald’s habit.” )

these boys will be the death of me, fic, one direction, genfic

Comments 21

sophi3g July 1 2012, 23:41:00 UTC

Aww, I really liked all three, but especially the middle one. Niall/Zayn is one of my favourites and it's so well written. I like how everything seems more relaxed and mature if that makes sense. Anyway, these were great x

flimsy July 3 2012, 10:42:00 UTC

I feel they're slowly growing up and that them being away from home a lot might speed up that process. Boys ♥

Thank you for reading!!

makebelieve11 July 2 2012, 01:53:00 UTC

This was amazing!!!! :)

flimsy July 3 2012, 10:42:11 UTC

Thanks darling!

rock_my_town July 2 2012, 02:40:30 UTC

I love love love gen fics with allusions to pairings. This was really wonderful. Sweet with Liam, calm and comfortable with Zayn and Niall, and hurty in that really good way with Harry and Louis. I would not be opposed to learning more of what happens with Harry and Louis figuring out how to not live together anymore, because the line about getting out of orbit left me inexplicably sad even amongst the warmth of them holding each other. Great work ♥

flimsy July 3 2012, 10:43:25 UTC

This actually started with the Harry&Louis scene, but they kept on bickering and that made me sad, so I turned it into three vignettes haha :D I like this verse, so I might play in it again.

Thank you! <3

prettykitty_aya July 2 2012, 04:31:11 UTC

these were all just absolutely gorgeous, soft and quiet. ♥

flimsy July 3 2012, 10:43:35 UTC

Thanks darling ♥

lissa_bear July 2 2012, 12:22:05 UTC

Oh, these are absolutely beautiful. I love all three of them, but particularly the first. You give wonderful glimpses of, not just Liam and Louis' character, but of all of them.

flimsy July 3 2012, 10:45:34 UTC

Thank you so much! Liam's and Louis' friendship is kind of special to me - I feel like Louis is often very careful with Liam. Sigh.

P.S. I'm going to add you! I hope that's alright? :D

lissa_bear July 3 2012, 11:24:27 UTC

Of course! Adding you back!

flimsy July 3 2012, 11:26:24 UTC

\o/

Hi!

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