Spliced: Part 5 - Chapter 7

May 24, 2012 20:57

TITLE: Spliced 5-7
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tommyglitter May 25 2012, 01:17:30 UTC
YOU POSTED!!!! :DDDDDD *runs off to read*

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flighty_dreams May 25 2012, 02:15:03 UTC
Yes, it finally happened! *grin*

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anonymous May 25 2012, 02:03:49 UTC
Oh, OUCH! I mean, I'm over the mood about the new posting (*squeeee!*), but just read chapter 6 as a warm-up, and...hmmm. I thought perhaps Matt was picking up on more than Alex w/the Chavelles and Red. Maybe a bit suspicious they were setting up some kind of trap.

Still, he could have told Min (still haven't settled on which name *I* prefer). There's just not a respectful way to color not communicating, y'know?

So here we now have regression, and I'm very sad to say it's not looking good for the two of them at all. And, having been where Min is in a relationship - it's better, just not *enough* better - well, it sucks. Really sucks. The kind of suckage that makes you feel 800 years old and tired.

None of which diminishes my delight in this story any less.

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flighty_dreams May 25 2012, 02:24:37 UTC
These two guys, *communicate* properly? We wish! ;-) More like fleeting moments of clarity, sigh.

I haven't been in that sort of relationship dilemma personally, so I can only imagine the frustration (and heartbreak). But yeah, the way you described it, spot on to Alex's feelings here. Sorry you know the feeling, but it's good to know it was captured realistically enough.

Thanks! If the road were easy, it wouldn't be nearly as satisfying right?

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dark_amphibian May 25 2012, 02:06:16 UTC
oops - sorry for the anon comment. LJ logged me out when not paying attention *sheepish grin*

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flighty_dreams May 25 2012, 02:25:16 UTC
No problem! It happens. Good to know who it was. :-)

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tommyglitter May 25 2012, 02:10:39 UTC
Poor Alex! I wish Matt would pull his head out of his ass. It's obvious he loves Alex, but he sure sucks at showing it!

So happy to see this posted. Now, the greedy person that I am is looking forward to more! Love this so much! :D

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flighty_dreams May 25 2012, 02:28:16 UTC
Yeah, they both seem to have communication issues! Sigh.

Lol, well I can't say I'm surprised about the wanting more already. *grin* Fortunately, it should NOT take as long this time to update (not that that's saying much, when last time it was a horrible 7 months)!

Thanks for the support!

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berthablue May 25 2012, 03:17:08 UTC
Yay, more posting!!!

You know, I used to run this social skills group for 8-10 year olds, and one of the hardest things was to teach them to apologize properly without trying to make the other person feel guilty or blaming them... I think the 8-10 year olds could teach Matt a thing or two!

I love Alex's inner struggle :D

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flighty_dreams May 26 2012, 13:55:27 UTC
Yay, indeed!

Yes, that clumsy apology did leave something to be desired... but at least it wasn't given with an 8 year old's pout! Matt's not quite THAT bad...

Oh he is struggling. *grin*

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