A Scotch for the Road - Part 19

Mar 04, 2012 21:46

TITLE: A Scotch for the Road - Part 19
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slavefic, scotch, femdom, original fic

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triptyx March 5 2012, 03:36:39 UTC
There was something niggling at him, but he couldn't put it into words.

Apart from a Free Man going out in a Parent-approved-date??? O_O ;)

And she is giving him an own account? <-----SPOILED!!!!! >:D >:D >:D

But seriously, how can you leave us like this with JEALOUSY EATING HIM UP and its not even the DATE!!! >:D >:D >:D

And they got to eat mangoes? What about my secret mission to Ty to get Brett into trouble on his free time? :D ;) :D :D :D

He understood the frustration of forever wanting but never having

We are no longer talking about mangoes are we? ;) :D :D :D

Serena Vanlean-Warren was never one to stand back and let things happen, especially when she believed she could manipulate the situation in some way.
Have I told you recently how much I like Jenna's mother? >:D >:D >:D

Nahh but teasing aside, I am relieved that Amber is a good friend and Jenna must not battle against everyone in her family and friend circle. One true friend who is happy for her and Brett! :) I am going soft and its all your fault!!!And again why ( ... )

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flighty_dreams March 6 2012, 04:33:14 UTC
Lol, I would imagine that's part of it, yes! :P

Brett, spoiled? Since when? I've never heard such a thing before. :P

Lol, we'll get to this special date eventually! :D

I don't know, what about this mission? Hmm.

We are no longer talking about mangoes are we? ;) :D :D :D

LOL. Are you talking about Ty feeling attraction to Brett??

Sigh, you adore her mother, I know! Next you'll tell me you love Sadie! :P

Yes, about time Jenna had at least ONE person on her and Brett's side...

It's called building up anticipation!! >:D

You're welcome!

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fran_fic March 5 2012, 04:06:02 UTC
And I thought I would be first -.-

I really liked the first part where Jenna talks with Amber. It describes so well what poor Brett went through, I really felt the sadness of it all! And it said so much about how even an obviously nice person as Amber, can still come across as almost cruel in what they say, just from sheer ignorance and naïvety about it.

Aww, sweet Ty ^.^ poor boy, so happy about some fruit! I see Triptyx didn't think he deserved it ;-)) I bet Ty congratulated himself at that moment for finding such a friend :-) I also found it really cute that Brett would buy cookies for himself :-D

Time for me to go on my morning walk! :-)

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triptyx March 5 2012, 04:31:07 UTC
It describes so well what poor Brett went through

I still think all is hearsay until proven!!! >:D >:D >:D ;) :D

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fran_fic March 5 2012, 04:55:48 UTC
You want a very detailed flash back describing exactly what happened?

Hmm... not a bad idea!:-)

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triptyx March 5 2012, 05:00:26 UTC
We just have his word as prove...and well after the 'I kissed her for you Mistress', I dont know if he just wanted to not get tied up, that time!!! >:D So yes some kind of ~objective~ proof would be nice!!! >:D >:D >:D *runs away from Flighty* ;) :D :D :D

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dark_amphibian March 5 2012, 04:29:23 UTC
oh, oh, OH!!!

A chapter from one of my favorite authors! Totally makes my weekend :-)

(Please don't take this as a complaint re: dearth of postings. I was away for a long time and am still catching up)

*scampers off to read*

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flighty_dreams March 5 2012, 05:11:38 UTC
Hey good to see you again! Hope you've been well.

No, I didn't see it as a complaint. I have been MIA a lot myself, so I totally understand. I'm hoping to get back in the LJ groove again.

Take care!

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dark_amphibian March 5 2012, 05:49:19 UTC
Wow, I think it's the mood I'm in. Ty's "could get used to this" remark was setting off alarm bells for me :-/

Still, really liking Amber, and just totally captivated by all the undercurrents you've got going. Also, while punishment scenes are a favorite kink of mine (*cough*Matt*cough*), I'm finding that Brett's background and the ongoing worry over real and nasty consequences for their relationship are muffling that interest.

Looking forward to the next chapter, and many cheers for your persistence!

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flighty_dreams March 6 2012, 04:20:07 UTC
Aww, I see it doesn't take much to set them off lol.

About time Jenna had a friend that was happy for her, right? And thanks, I'm glad those undercurrents are being felt! :-)

Matt and punishment scenes? What, when? All I can seem to remember is him getting abducted by a certain someone... Oh wait. As if I could forget his jerkiness in Part 1! :P

Thanks! Cheers for your persistence in commenting on each chapter. :D

*ETA* There is also a short holiday fic I wrote that's a Scotch outtake. It's here, in case you're interested:
http://flighty-dreams.livejournal.com/41816.html#cutid1

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fran_fic March 6 2012, 05:16:07 UTC
Oh wait. As if I could forget his jerkiness in Part 1! :P

It will never be forgotten... it will always be held in dear memory ;-DD

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berthablue March 5 2012, 06:09:14 UTC
I like seeing Amber and Jenna able to talk, and then seeing Brett and Ty get some boy time together to relax :) I like how Jenna and Brett both reveal so much about their relationship by talking with their friends :)

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flighty_dreams March 6 2012, 04:04:59 UTC
Yeah, I find it fun to do parallel scenes like this, them both talking with a friend. :D

And it's true, the confidences that come out around friends do reveal a lot about people.

Thanks for reading!

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