A Scotch for the Road - Part 15

[flighty_dreams]

TITLE: A Scotch for the Road - Part 15
AUTHOR: flighty_dreams
WARNINGS: Slavefic. NC-17.  F/m.
WORD COUNT: 5,370 (this chapter)/ story so far (over 40K)
SUMMARY: A slave enduring a party encounters more than he bargained for.
NOTES: Thanks to aurila for her assistance.
FEEDBACK: Always welcome, even if it's just to say that you read it.

Comments

[fran_fic]

*shudder* I hate partys like that! Poor Brett!! And now I know what you meant by what you said about chapter 15 and women :-))

The timid kiss suddenly changed, Brett teasing her cousin’s lips open and kissing her with as much passion as he’d ever displayed with Jenna.

O_O Oh, he would have been in SO much trouble with me if I had been Jenna!

“Still sure he feels so deeply for you?”

I don't think I've seen so much poison dripping since I was at this snake show once...

[triptyx]

O_O Oh, he would have been in SO much trouble with me if I had been Jenna!

THIS!!!! Exactly! ;) I will have more coherent thoughts after sleeping, I came from no-internet-land to find you and Flighty updated! Too sleepy to make legible comments, but I had to say SO MUCH TROUBLE!!! >;)

[fran_fic]

So, so, SO much trouble!! *very strict look* I can't imagine what his excuses will be... But it will sure be interesting to read them :-))

Our posting rhythms seems to line up at the moment :-) Too much to read all at once? :-D

[flighty_dreams]

Lol, even as you disapprove mightily, you are also happily imagining all the delicious slave-in-trouble scenes! :P

Yeah they do seem to be in sync! Funny how that works.

[dramagirl007]

I love this story. Wow what a chapter. I want to slap Jenna's mother, she deserves it. I can't wait until the next chapter to this story, or spliced, whichever comes first. Keep up the good work and please update both ASAP. :)

[flighty_dreams]

Lol, a slap would do her good, yes. Thanks, I'll do my best.

[musespet]

Hot little piece! I was pleasantly surprised to see this updated again so quickly. Brett is such a charming little boy. I do wonder about his reaction to Teresa. Cliff-Hanger endings equal much journal stalking until the next tidbit is supplied. Thanks for a lovely read.

[alienfish]

Wait, wait, I can fanwank it! "How do we fool everyone into thinking I'm just a good slave?"

Ah, if it's only so innocent.

[flighty_dreams]

Lol, fanwank will always find a way. I think it's one of the rules of fandom. :D

[flighty_dreams]

Thanks, yeah I was quicker than usual, because I wanted to get this out before I go away on vacation. But yes feel free to stalk, I know the pain of cliffhangers!

You're welcome. Thanks for commenting.

[sa_tsl]

brett and jenna are in for a huge ride . the passionate kiss and the barbed comment didn't help . i am so looking forward to how jenna will react !

thanks for updating ! :)
* hugs and cookies*

[flighty_dreams]

always fun to end on an interesting note! :D

thanks for commenting.

[triptyx]

BRETT GOT INTO TROUBLE!!

FINALLY Wonderful!! >:)

I had imagined various scenarios: he would slip and make something terribly stupid male like try and defend verbally (I had given up physically, since that really would spell trouble) Jenna from some other male, but FREE male, or he would say something to spoiled intimate to Jenna in public, or as you hinted with the shameless Ty flirting with him, or when I began reading this situation I was like ‘he is going to hesitate in following or refuse *gasp* a direct order from someone Jenna’s mother
BUT *LOL* I NEVER THOUGHT HE WOULD GET INTO KISSING ANOTHER FREE WOMAN IN FRONT OF JENNA = A+++!!!
This spells the most PERFECT trouble for Brett!!!
I LIKE it!!! >:)

I love it, its like having a golden retriever because it’s such a friendly breed, but getting jealous if he allows himself to petted by everybody and greets with a wagging tail even the burglars!!! :D :D :D YAY I got to make a Brett-is-like-having-a-puppy-reference!!! >:)

So the TRAINED pleasure slave should not allow

[fran_fic]

I have to REALLY LOL while thinking what crossed Fran’s mind what Brett would see happening to him if he was owned by her!!! >:D >:D >:D

Oh, he would have been one ball down, at least... ;-)

[triptyx]

Dont get your hopes up...I am already picturing him saying "I am sorry Mistress" on his knees (and please dont misunderstand me, there MUST be groveling involved after this display, but it should NOT pacify Jenna) and Jenna will go "awww look at his puppy eyes" and cuddle him as "punishment"!!! :( So whatever delicious punishments are dancing around in our minds, we wont get, he will weasel his out of one after this grievous offense too... :( :(

[fran_fic]

You think so? *snivels* :-(