[fic] Kurayami (Harukanaru Toki no Naka de)

[flight_of_ideas]

Title: Kurayami (Darkness)
Fandom: Harukanaru Toki no Naka de
Pairing: Eisen/Akane... sort of
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine, but I want the games!!
Notes: Translations at the bottom.

Comments

[thisissong]

Awww! ::whines:: Poor thing, he goes through so much hell (okay, so I base that on the first game and not the show since I haven't seen all of it... >_>) and gets pushed to the side a lot. Dark darkness indeed. ::fwibble::
My two cents, it's fine like it is.

[flight_of_ideas]

Yeah, you know what they say about hurting those you love... I still don't know where this Eisen obsession came from, as he'd totally not the type of character I normally go for... >.> Saa.
Thank you though! ::squishes you and Eisen::

[nyriane]

Very well written. ^_^

The title should have tipped me off that this wasn't going to be your fluffy rainbows and hearts story, but I guess I'm just used to expecting the happy ending. I like how the twist is that there isn't a twist, though, and I think you should leave the ending alone, too. =D

Still, poor Eisen... =P

[flight_of_ideas]

Thanks! I actually had intended it to be a short, completely fluffy story, but as I was writing it this occurred to me instead, and I liked it so much better. But yes, poor Eisen!

Thanks for commenting!

[minrathous]

I should've expected that this wouldn't end up too fluffy when I read the title. I'm normally used to seeing Eisen in the cutesy fluffy rainbow coated world, so this was a bit new for me but otherwise the story's quite well written and IMO a tad haunting ^^;*huggles poor Eisen*

Shall look forward to seeing more of your work :)

[flight_of_ideas]

Part of me wondered if this wasn't a bit too far out there for Eisen, but he's got that sense of devotion to him, so I don't think it's too far off base. But yes, different from most of what I've seen out there. ^^;;

Thank you for reading! ^^

[ecru_irk_rue]

Sighs Eisen gets hurt so easily, I love him ^^

[flight_of_ideas]

I'm so sorry it took me so long to notice your comments!! Thank you so very much! I love Eisen to pieces too! Someday I want to write him a happy fic, but I've yet to get an idea as to how to go about that. Someday...