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Motherland

Author’s Notes: I had a cohesive story in my head while I was brainstorming, but when I actually started writing, it ended up into something more like a set of thematically related drabbles coexisting in the same universe.

One paragraph in Part 3 is a pastiche of my favourite passage in Vladimir Nabokov’s The Original of Laura. I don’

Comments

[freed_misery]

This is lovely. I adore how you wrote everyone, capturing personalities in a line or so (and oh the dialogue, had me grinning like a dork =D). And from someone who's been scarred by fic-in-second-person and tends not to be a fan of it, the last part is just utter <3

[flickre]

I'm really glad that you liked their personalities, and especially that you liked the dialogue! I was afraid that it would be the weakest parts of the story. So glad that it worked for you. :) And thanks so much for reading and commenting. ♥

[freed_misery]

I didn't find the dialogue weak at all, it's flow was very different from the overall piece but I think it still worked.
Twas a pleasure to read, thank you for sharing ^^

[redcottonstar]

idk how to explain how much i loved this :| because my heart seriously did this funny flip and i'm currently at a loss for words so i'm probably sounding really crazy rn but ;_____;

♥!!! i think you are wonderful :')

[flickre]

No, you don't sound crazy! Thank you for reading and for your wonderful comment. :) ♥

[sadteeth]

ahh this was great! the dialogue was so slkdf funny and perfectly conveyed the boys' absolute stupidity while still getting the point of junsu missing home across.

i desperately needed more junsu, so ♥

[flickre]

Yay your comment makes me really happy! It took me the longest time to figure out how to convey some seriousness in 2PM's group interaction without detracting from their usual goofiness. Thanks for reading and for your lovely comment. :)

Junsu fic is ♥

[jaybomb]

you are absolutely amazing ;___; Everything was so beautiful and the interactions in the middle ogubwer I was smiling so wide. It's so them. Everything about this was perfect.

[flickre]

Aww I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. :) Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. ♥

[skystreaked]

Just so you know, I've copied and pasted this fic so I can put it in a document.

I'm putting it on my iPod.

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I... am really flattered, thank you haha ♥