Comments | fleshflutter: The Old Block (gen-fic, 4232 words, PG-13)

fleshflutter

The Old Block (gen-fic, 4232 words, PG-13)

Jul 28, 2007 18:31

The Old Block
(gen-fic, 4232 words, PG-13, warnings for implied child prostitution, non-con, pedophilia)
In which Sam and Dean go for a ride with a stranger, and the stranger wishes they hadn't.

( The younger one is about the age he likes. Still a little plump, with round, rosy cheeks like a cherub's. The older one is too old but so damn pretty Stevie's willing to make an exception. )

supernatural, gen, teeny-winchesters, fic

Comments 136

greenblue26 July 28 2007, 20:23:00 UTC

that was really good. I loved seeing a glimpse into their past, and how cunning they could really be. even sammy wasn't so naive at his age--and i'm so glad he came to the rescue. they watch each other's backs & this was a perfect example of it.

fleshflutter July 31 2007, 16:56:40 UTC

I'm very happy you liked it, especially that they were both watching each other's backs, not just Dean watching out for Sammy. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :)

tigriswolf July 28 2007, 20:35:30 UTC

AWESOME.

fleshflutter July 31 2007, 17:00:58 UTC

Thank you ever so much!
♥

seriously_sam July 28 2007, 21:20:15 UTC

Wow, that was a really great story. It was excellently told, and I liked how it was through Stevie's point of view. Nice job.

fleshflutter July 31 2007, 17:03:58 UTC

Oh I'm really glad it worked for you! Thank you ever so much for reading and commenting! :)

kenzimone July 28 2007, 21:24:26 UTC

Okay, this made me really REALLY happy.

fleshflutter July 31 2007, 17:04:59 UTC

Oh I'm so so glad to hear that! Thank you so much for reading! :)

ponderosa121 July 28 2007, 21:28:11 UTC

It amazes me how much tension you wound through the whole thing. I was worried for them from start to stop and oh, god, John at the end, where there's that sense of concern, but it's underneath all the making sure they're going to survive.

ponderosa121 July 28 2007, 21:29:27 UTC

p.s. I really love when you write from other peoples points of view, it really heightens the relationship between Sam and Dean. <3333!

fleshflutter July 31 2007, 17:07:17 UTC

Your feedback makes me exceptionally gleeful. I'm thrilled that there was a sense of concern as I didn't want it to seem as though the boys were automatically going to get through it without damage. And I'm glad the outsider POV works for you because they're thoroughly addictive and I think I'll write nothing but!
Mostly, just thank you for being so awesome. :)
♥