Comments | fleshflutter: Oh, it is love (Sam/Dean, 1202 words, pg-13ish?)

fleshflutter

Oh, it is love (Sam/Dean, 1202 words, pg-13ish?)

Apr 02, 2008 21:21

Schmoop, because a girl can't write angsty horror for ever. Also, because when you start to feel that humanity - as a whole - is damn disappointing, schmoop is the best way not to start headdesking. Unbeta'd.

Oh, it is love
(Sam/Dean, 1202 words, pg-13ish?)

( In the time it takes for Sam to roll over and burrow his head deeper under Dean's arm, lips brushing the soft skin of Dean's side in a butterfly kiss, Dean goes from mostly asleep to completely freaking out. )

supernatural, fluff, fic, sam/dean

Comments 195

aeroport_art April 2 2008, 20:50:46 UTC

I DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW YOU WRITE SO WELL, IT'S LIKE MAGIC.

Honestly. Like, I don't even know what to DO with myself, this is so good. Usually I'll point out quotes I like or what part of the writing draws me to a piece, but this one is a complete mystery to me. Somehow, it's just so tangible and believable and Aww, Dean!!, and even the potentially-awkward detail like bolding "INCEST" just WORKS when it's you behind the wheel.

"I've been… you've no idea. Dean, you… Honestly? You're a little late to the party," says Sam.
I love this line to death. It's so sweet ;_;

*mems*

fleshflutter April 6 2008, 12:06:47 UTC

Oh this feedback just made me so very flaily with glee! Honestly, this meant so so much to me, especially coming from you! Thank you so so much, my lovely. ♥

pharis April 2 2008, 20:51:59 UTC

I can absolutely see Sam's grin. And Dean's confused face. PUPPIES LOVE EACH OTHER!

fleshflutter April 6 2008, 12:07:12 UTC

Oh I'm so glad it worked for you! Thank you ever so much for reading and commenting! :)

tabaqui April 2 2008, 20:52:05 UTC

Awwwww!
I love.
I particularly love Dean just sitting there on the side of the road, totally calm, thinking. And telling random people he loves his brother.

Heeeee!

Good stuff.

fleshflutter April 6 2008, 12:07:45 UTC

Oh I'm so very happy it worked for you! Thank you ever so much for reading and commenting! :)

causeways April 2 2008, 21:12:44 UTC

OKAY THAT IS KIND OF THE BEST THING EVER. And utterly required every bit of that capslockery. I just grinned at the screen like a fool.

fleshflutter April 6 2008, 12:08:13 UTC

Oh you? Are most awesome. Thank you ever so much! ♥

sanj April 2 2008, 21:13:01 UTC

Oh, thank god!! I needed happy schmoop today. :)

"Car's cool. Just fallen in love with my brother."

Okay, you win the internets today.

fleshflutter April 6 2008, 12:09:05 UTC

Oh I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you ever so much for reading and commenting! :)