Comments | fleshflutter: In the valley of the shadow (Sam/Jess/Madison/Dean, 1012 words, nc-17)

fleshflutter

In the valley of the shadow (Sam/Jess/Madison/Dean, 1012 words, nc-17)

Jan 26, 2008 21:28

Don't watch Heart late at night while you're in a weird mood.

In the valley of the shadow
(Sam/Jess/Madison/Dean and variations thereof, 1012 words, nc-17, warning for zombies)

( Their voices are pitched too low for Dean to catch the words but he figures it’s just girl-talk interspersed with the occasional soft, throaty giggle. He doesn’t think there’s enough in their heads for them to be saying anything important. Probably just dust and maggots. )

angst, horror, supernatural, sam/dean/jess/madison, evil!sam, fic, sam/dean

Comments 256

shoiryu January 26 2008, 22:09:54 UTC

Ohhh Jesus I had to read that ending a few times to figure it out. That's a hell of a gutpunch. Nice. Thanks so much for sharing it.

fleshflutter January 31 2008, 17:47:24 UTC

I'm ever so happy it worked for you! Thanks ever so much for reading and commenting - I really appreciate it! :)

oxoniensis January 26 2008, 22:11:23 UTC

Wow, this is incredible. The contrasts between the attempted normality and the sheer wrongness of it. Creepy and good, yes.

fleshflutter January 31 2008, 17:48:02 UTC

I'm totally delighted that it worked for you! Thank you very much for the really kind feedback! :)

thandie January 26 2008, 22:13:33 UTC

OH GOD, that was so creepy...the last line is awesome, I wasn't expecting that. Why do you always manage to get me so much!? You masterful evil genious :)

fleshflutter January 31 2008, 17:48:30 UTC

Oooh thank you so so much! I'm really happy you liked it! :)

randomisedhabit January 26 2008, 22:14:44 UTC

*shivers* Good god. ILU, weird mood combined with Heart! Jesus, this is killing me. It's like you're staring at the gun pointed at your head and the last full stop is the bullet coming at your head. Seriously.

fleshflutter January 31 2008, 17:49:11 UTC

I'm absolutely thrilled that it worked for you! Thank you very much for the really lovely feedback! :)

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Re: and dean knows all the time... fleshflutter January 31 2008, 17:51:49 UTC

I like to think that part of their imperfection is that Jess and Madison don't know what they are. And thank you so so much for reading and commenting, it makes me very happy! :)