Dealing with the Devil (evil!Dean genfic, 3296 words, pg-13)

[fleshflutter]

For Ponderosa. Not only did she draw something from something I'd written but she has always been very lovely to me and I am most grateful to her for her friendship. ♥

This piece, which is written in 2nd person (flee, people, flee!), was inspired by this awesome piece of art by pond, featuring the most insanely gorgeous evil!Dean.

Dealing with

Comments

[fleshflutter]

*loves*

[peach_gurl]

Lord! I love the way you write an outsider's perspective of Dean, it's so twisted and fabulous and lovely. Everytime I read your stories I'm reminded of why I'm a Dean girl.

[fleshflutter]

Ooh that's so cool! I'm so glad it worked for you - and Dean is just always so much fun to write! :)

[dodificus]

You know what you're dealing with now. It's not a game. You won't win.

But you have to try, don't you? And so you let him deal the cards.

The narrator has a bit of the old (non evil) Dean in him, in his character, the way he's going to do the right thing even when it's meaningless. It just highlights how off Evil!Dean is.

[fleshflutter]

I wanted the narrator to be pretty sympathetic, which was tricky as I didn't feel much of him was coming through so your feedback makes me very happy! Thanks so much for reading! :)

[minim_calibre]

Oh, chilling and excellent.

[fleshflutter]

So glad it worked for you! Thanks ever so for reading and commenting! :)

[logovo]

Lovely. Very much enjoyed the POV of your hunter.

[fleshflutter]

I'm very happy you enjoyed it! Thank you very much for reading and commenting. :)