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fleshflutter

Mini-Nano: Dark Side of the Moon (27)

Nov 27, 2007 08:06

The Dark Side of the Moon
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( By the time Sam's got the stake ready and the bonfire piled up around it, his back aches, his arms are scratched and bloodied, and he has numerous splinters. )

supernatural, wip, mini-nano, fic, sam/dean

Comments 39

angharadd November 27 2007, 08:45:20 UTC

This chapter lost me at a loss for words. It's beautiful, and it hurts.

But he can't kiss Dean on the mouth because it would feel too much like goodbye.
Yeah right, 'cause what he've done does not feel like a goddbye, no XD *hugs Sam*

curtainpull November 27 2007, 08:56:22 UTC

Sam's totally loosing it! EEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP *hides*

P.S I'm not sure how I'm going to cope next month without fic to wake up to every day! Thanks so much for doing this!

ksha2222 November 27 2007, 09:09:14 UTC

Oh...My...God! O_O Tell me where you live so I can stalk you until you finish the next chapter! XD

The imagery was great, as always. :) The smile Dean gave before he drifted off and the stake image at the end. I also have always like they way you've described how Dean looks under the curse. Perfectly creepy.

I really cant wait for the next chapter!

ahania November 27 2007, 10:19:24 UTC

The tenderness between them there, with Dean all helpless and trusting and Sam kind of skittering off into batshit territory was very nicely done.

I'll definitely miss this fic when it's over :)

gretazreta November 27 2007, 10:30:11 UTC

Beautiful and horrifying at the same time.
I don't trust you, you know. You've freaked me out with brilliant writing too many times in the past.
I want this to end happily, I really really REALLY do.

SO MUCH OMG.
But I don't know that it can. Sam's gonna burn Dean AT THE STAKE*flails*

This is very vivid, I think that's why it's got me so engaged. Lovely, lovely writing.