Five Times Sam did a Stupid Thing and Dean Bailed Him Out (and One Time He Couldn’t)

[fleshflutter]

Five Times Sam did a Stupid Thing and Dean Bailed Him Out (and One Time He Couldn’t)
(Sam/Dean, 4531 words, Hard R)

Comments

[lbmisscharlie]

That was so lovely and a little heartbreaking. Nicely done. I really liked this line: Sam’s got a future’ Dad and Dean both say. Sam wonders if this means Dean only has a present, whether Dad only has a past. It just seems to sum up the Winchesters so well.

[fleshflutter]

Oh I'm ever so glad that worked for you, that bit just kind of sprang out of nowhere! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :)

[dragonmuse]

Ouch. That last part really was short and sharp. I'm just glad I can still smile looking back at the previous ones and looking forward to the fact that they're together again during the series, despite the various hurts associated with them as well. Seriously though, great fic. :)

[fleshflutter]

Thank you so so much for reading and commenting, I'm ever so glad it worked for you! :)

[supernation]

Love the intricacy of this story - so much detail about their lives. Love the words that are unsaid. Love the kiss - very sweet and secret. Good, good work writing this!

[fleshflutter]

Oh thank you ever so much! I'm really happy that you liked it! :)

The end

[angels3]

just pissed me right the hell off. What did he want Dean to do he was the one leaving. Oh well I loved the part about Dean going to see the teacher and that Sam could tell he was nervous. I think what I like the most is that Dean was actually nervous.

Re: The end

[fleshflutter]

I don't think anyone expects any of the Winchester men to behave in a reasonable manner! I'm ever so glad you liked it though, and thanks so much for reading and commenting! :)

[fleshflutter]

eee! Thank you very much! :)