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Awkward Moments Challenge Entry

Sep 14, 2009 22:50

Sam laid the blanket out in the dark back yard next to the path to minimize footprints. Laying down he stretched out muscles that still twinged and complained from time to time. Mikaela quickly followed, the warm air causing them to leave a space between them, and they both settled quickly into a state of light dozing. It had been such a tiring ( Read more... )

rated pg, challenge: awkward moments, fiction, continuity: movie

Comments 13

piscaria September 15 2009, 04:02:53 UTC

I love it! Bee's panicked call to Ratchet made me grin. Great job!

english_enigma September 17 2009, 03:46:32 UTC

Thank you!
Bee knows Ratchet can fix anything; even awkward social situations. :D

cazcatharsis September 15 2009, 04:05:25 UTC

*facepalm*
Bee, poor sweet dumb as a post Bee...
*pat pat pat*

*snicker*

i can just hear Sam's voice, almost exactly how it was when his mom asked him if he was 'masterbating'... 'what?! NO MOM!'

english_enigma September 17 2009, 03:44:19 UTC

Yes, perhaps Bee has gotten a little overconfident in his abilities to understand humans. :)

mmouse15 September 15 2009, 04:14:26 UTC

I'm glad you came to join the party! What a great (and funny) story you wrote!

english_enigma September 17 2009, 03:47:06 UTC

Thank you! :)

chai16 September 15 2009, 17:12:25 UTC

hysterical
and of so very awkward in the best of ways

english_enigma September 17 2009, 03:48:26 UTC

Thank you!

sister_dear September 15 2009, 17:46:45 UTC

Lol! Oh Bee. <3 Miscommunication at it's finest!

english_enigma September 17 2009, 03:50:45 UTC

Yeah, gotta love Bee. He's so very proud of how well he handled the situation. :D