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icedteainthebag in fleetloveslaura

laura/cottle: indispensible

Jun 03, 2009 12:01

Title: Laura Fraks The Fleet
Chapter #18: Indispensible
Pairing: Laura/Cottle
Rating: T (omg, it's not MA)
Word Count: 186
Spoilers: Season 4, general
Notes: This is for my PLPs, especially the one who likes this pairing in a sekrit kinky kind of way. :)

( indispensible )

!author: icedteainthebag, /sherman 'jack' cottle

Comments 26

37_soul_sister June 3 2009, 19:33:22 UTC

wow. this is brilliant. I absolutely love it.

I especially love the way you brought that last bit of dialogue together. It really makes the whole thing work beautifully.

icedteainthebag June 4 2009, 00:21:03 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm so happy you liked it. I think this is probably my favorite of all of them. :)

roslin_is_gaia June 3 2009, 20:56:58 UTC

This is raw and tender at the same time.
Absolutely stunning.

icedteainthebag June 4 2009, 00:21:22 UTC

Thank you.

missbevcrusher June 3 2009, 21:18:51 UTC

While heartbreaking, this was actually quite sweet.

Thanks for writing.

icedteainthebag June 4 2009, 00:21:45 UTC

Thanks for reading. :) Loved your feedback.

samcasey June 3 2009, 21:23:10 UTC

I have never ever liked this pairing...

UNTIL NOW

That was sooo beautiful and the emotion was just amazing! oh and the dialogue Great Job!

icedteainthebag June 4 2009, 00:22:12 UTC

Thank you so much, sweetie. ♥

peelthelabel June 3 2009, 21:34:41 UTC

I just started to cry.

icedteainthebag June 4 2009, 00:22:35 UTC

*HUGS* I know. It was sad.

peelthelabel June 4 2009, 08:50:46 UTC

It really was. And beautifully witten!!