Long Way From Home, Chapter Twenty Seven

[fleetingfancy]

Title: Long Way From Home
Author: me, un-beta'd
Warnings: Language, Violence
Summary: Ryan's dad shows up unexpectedly and throws the Cohens +1 into turmoil
Cross posted: fanfiction.net

I forced myself to stay away from "Deception" long enough to finish this chapter of this one...sorry for the delay for those keeping up with this one.

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Chapter Twenty

Comments

[fifimom]

Excellent update.
Ryan standing up for Trey and then forbidding the Cohens from attending the funeral...wonderfully written and I love that he is still turning to Caleb, still allowing Caleb to drive him.
This may have been difficult to write but it doesn't show.
THANKS!
Now I'm off to reread some previous chapters.

[fleetingfancy]

The Cohens are right to be concerned so you can see both sides and I think it will be fun to have Caleb in the mix as an unexpected ally for Ryan concerning Trey. So that's kind of what I'll be touching on in the next chapter. I've got it about half way done already.

Glad your still enjoying it:)

[nullsys]

I'm completely with fifimom on this one.
This chapter is simply amazing.
Thx.

[fleetingfancy]

Thanks. I just wasn't sure because the argument just kind of came out of nowhere. I had planned on jumping right to the funeral with Trey and just seeing what unfolded there but then I suddenly decided to address the Thanksgiving stuff and, voila, instant drama. lol.

[alluxera]

I've found you here through your homepage link on ff.net. I really like this story and I read it from the beginning and I am so glad that you've updated this story! It's one of my favorites.
Thank you for sharing.

[fleetingfancy]

I'm glad you're enjoying it. I have the next chapter about half way done so it shouldn't take near as long for the next update.