Hidden Relations

[flawless_beauti]

Name: Hidden Relations
Rated: Pg
Author: flawless_beauti {Me}
Word count: 210
Disclaimer: Harry and Draco belong to J.K Rowling, and as that is not my name, I can assume I don't own them.

Warnings: Character death, H/D, possibly angst
A/N: My first story and the plot-bunnies torture me with this angst and serious thing. >_< Comments are welcomed.

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Comments

[ruinithil]

*sniffle* It's so sad! But beautiful, the pain is almost touchable. I love that you kept it so annonymous through the whole thing, right to the end. Very lovely.

[flawless_beauti]

Thank you. =) That made my day, and I could cry from relief. I was very nervous about posting this, but I'm glad it wasn't a complete failure.

Were there any mistakes you could find? I didn't have a beta and I did the best I could, but people slip.

~Flawless_Beauti

[ruinithil]

The only thing I found even remotely wrong was "In a way I suppose I did die along" just because I thought it should have "with him" at the end of it or something. But other than that, it was very, very good. <3

[flawless_beauti]

Alright, I'll edit that. Now that you mention it, it does seem a bit like an incomplete though.

[lire_casander]

But... but... *is speechless*

I loved the green-eyed golden boy who never knew which side he belonged on. --> this is so true, I could almost feel Draco's pain. It's incredibly well written. I don't know what to say, only that I'm really in love with your angst and I'm going to put it under my memories.

[flawless_beauti]

-squeals-

Thank you!

[bbygurltrble]

This is just.....wow. I can't think of anything else to say.

[flawless_beauti]

-Grins-

Wow works for me. ~_^

[sesheta_66]

I do love angst, and you did this so well. I don't usually read death fics(duh - I didn't read the warning), but this ... well ... so good. *sniffs*

One thing I would suggest is to put the text behind a cut, so it doesn't take up as much space on people's f-list.

[sesheta_66]

Just to let you know that I defriended you, but only because you are under 18. You are still welcome to keep me on your friends list if you like, and read my fics that are 14A or under.