Fic: Mississippi [Torchwood] R implied Jack/Ianto

[flatlanddan]

Title: Mississippi (Five Things Ianto Did After Jack Did What He Did 2/5)
Rating: R
Pairing: Implied Jack/Ianto
Disclaimer:All characters owned by the BBC. Although I do pay my TV liscense so I do feel a slight ownership...oh alright. Not mine at all.
Note: Thanks to fairyd123 for the beta read, eviltish telling me is was quite alright and randommagic for much prodding and

Comments

[stlscape]

I *really* like this. I think you've caught the characters' voices perfectly, and love the Ianto-stopwatch connection.

[flatlanddan]

Glad you enjoyed! Dialogue is one of the things I find easiest to write so it's always a bit of a struggle for me not to just put that in :D

[tau_sigma]

This is beautiful. I particularly love the way Ianto's state of mind is treated by himself and by the rest of the team - it's very 'real' feeling. Poor boy.

Where is part one, btw? I can't seem to find it.

[flatlanddan]

Torchwood Three seems very willing to put with off kilter mental states in staff. Nothing really out of the ordinary, just another day at Torchwood.

Link to part one. For some reason the tagging has stopped working in that journal. Absolutely no reason that I can see. It really gets on my nerves since I'd rather not use this journal for public posts.

[mandy_mck]

Poor Ianto. I hope his drean comes true.
"Blind panic had been setting in before Jack grabbed him and started whispering in his ear. One Mississippi, two Mississippi… "
Aww loved this bit, Jack supporting Ianto. xxx

[burntcopper]

this is rather fascinating, it is. the medication and the OCD and everyone in the team just accepting it as a quirk. Plus nice use of language and dream-like state.

[badwolf36]

Absolutely brilliant. The characterization was spot on. Adored the original stopwatch connection and the bit with the medication was rather fascinating; seemed almost like it could be canon. Loved this story! Thanks for sharing! Keep writing!