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AND EVEN IN OUR SLEEP -- ANNE PHOENIX

Jul 07, 2010 17:47

Title: And Even in Our Sleep
Author: annephoenix
Pairing(s): Alex/?
Rating: R
Word Count: 900
Summary: "Tom must never know about such things. About Alex on his knees, begging for his life, pleading and crying as the gun was pressed against his head."
Warning(s): Sexual violence
Author's Notes: Written for the flash_rider community’s seventh challenge prompt, "And ( Read more... )

[prompt] and even in our sleep, [author] annephoenix

Comments 33

nyxelestia July 7 2010, 17:27:57 UTC

Intense. :)

annephoenix July 12 2010, 10:48:53 UTC

Thanks for commenting!

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annephoenix July 12 2010, 10:49:21 UTC

Glad you liked it - he certainly is pretty when he's in distress!

lullabylily July 7 2010, 19:26:23 UTC

That *was* really intense. I was completley drawn in and could physically feel Alex's angst. I liked the tender chemistry between Alex and Tom to balance it out.
Perfect!

annephoenix July 12 2010, 10:49:47 UTC

Thanks, really glad you liked it!

leonloire94 July 7 2010, 19:34:47 UTC

Ffffffffuck.
All my brain can come up with right now is 'I love you'.
I love how it flips between the two. It's so... contrasting and intense.

annephoenix July 12 2010, 10:50:31 UTC

Thanks -- glad it affected you like that :-)!

hjbender July 7 2010, 20:46:38 UTC

Woah. That scene with the whole gun-fellatio was seriously intense and frightening. Love how you tied in the classroom lecture to Alex's missions; I was actually relived that Tom woke Alex up before his nightmare could continue. Great work!

annephoenix July 12 2010, 10:51:07 UTC

You have no idea how happy it makes me to see a new, active face in this little fandom :-)! Thanks for commenting!