Delayed Gratification 2 - HPStrangelove - Delayed Gratification

Jun 03, 2009 09:00



Title: Delayed Gratification 2

Author: hpstrangelove

Rating: NC-17

Summary: Yassen did have some morals, and sexually assaulting a fourteen-year-old boy was something he could not bring himself to do, no matter how much that boy reminded him of his former lover, John Rider. So for ten long years, he’d waited, and watched, and planned for this day, a day when Alex ( Read more... )

[author] hpstrangelove, [prompt] delayed gratification

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mieka_writes June 3 2009, 16:09:58 UTC
Guh....

dear god those two are hot together...

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hpstrangelove June 3 2009, 16:42:45 UTC
They certainly are. I love writing them. They are so much fun.

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mieka_writes June 3 2009, 16:46:04 UTC
part of me wonders if Alex wasn't aware Yassen was in the area.. but I'm not sure if he'd try baiting Yassen like that.. later though :)

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libby_drew June 3 2009, 16:10:14 UTC
*thud*

You like teasing us, don't you? ;)

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hpstrangelove June 3 2009, 16:41:07 UTC
There's only so much detail I can get in with only 1k words to work with ;-)

But I also an extended version of this one too.

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hpstrangelove June 3 2009, 17:59:13 UTC
Oh yes...most times I have those eyes in mind whenever I am writing Yassen ;-)

I always save the first draft before I started cutting to get in under 1k words, so there will be an extended version.

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jusmine984 June 3 2009, 18:52:33 UTC
Oh, this is fantastic, m'dear. But, really, you are a terrible tease.

...Or perhaps you're a really good tease... Whatever. Can't wait to read the extended version. (Yes, I spy on comments. :D)

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hpstrangelove June 3 2009, 20:14:13 UTC
Thanks for your lovely comment. I'm so glad you like it!

Before I cut it back, I had a 'three months later' part to go along with this...I always start out thinking I'll never get to 1k words, then end up trying to figure out what to cut, and it ends up being the explicit parts. That's when I got the idea for 'extended versions', kind of like what they did with the LotR DVDs ;-)

I don't think anyone will complain.

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jusmine984 June 4 2009, 01:19:22 UTC
The only thing that we could possibly complain about is waiting to read it. And, well, unfortunately, I can't really do that, since that's half my fault. lol. ^_^

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randrews25 June 4 2009, 00:35:49 UTC
I still like how you write these two!
Hotness without intercourse is very good^^
do continue :D

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hpstrangelove June 4 2009, 01:04:25 UTC
It's amazing what a little innuendo can do!

Thanks so much for reading. I love writing these two. Believe me, there will be more.

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