Worth It

May 19, 2009 21:20

Title: Worth It
Author: Jusmine
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He waited, and he hoped.
Word Count: 994
Pairing: John/Yassen
Disclaimer: I do not own Alex Rider.
Notes: Thanks to Ara for for a little preliminary positive feedback. Hope you all enjoy, comments are always appreciated!

Worth It )

[author] jusmine, [prompt] delayed gratification

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Comments 16

hpstrangelove May 20 2009, 09:56:18 UTC
Oh that was wonderful! You did a fantastic job (but I knew you would).

I could just feel how Yassen was falling more and more for John through the entire thing. And the ending was so satisfying.

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jusmine984 May 20 2009, 13:16:02 UTC
Why thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. ^_^

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winoniel May 21 2009, 20:27:56 UTC
Beautiful take on the prompt! I really like how you built the tension, and especially liked John being slightly unsure of himself! Very realistic, very REAL, very sweet, and very gratifying!

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jusmine984 May 21 2009, 20:50:11 UTC
Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed. :D

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luna_shovegood June 5 2009, 18:55:57 UTC
*giggles* Tis very good!

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jusmine984 June 5 2009, 19:03:41 UTC
*bows* Thank you m'dear! ^_^

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luna_shovegood June 5 2009, 19:09:34 UTC
*aplauds*
Well it is ^_^
*trys to angle screen so that her mother can't see it*

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jusmine984 June 5 2009, 19:38:18 UTC
*laughs* Hey, it's not as bad as it could be!! ^_^

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mieka_writes July 5 2009, 14:43:33 UTC
sweetness.. and cuteness.. I like seeing Yassen before he was Mr cool collected assassin.

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jusmine984 July 5 2009, 19:49:21 UTC
Thanks. :)

When I write John/Yassen, that's how I think of Yassen. I think that John's "betrayal" (working for MI6, not Scorpia) and his death would change him into Mr. Cool Collected Assassin. :)

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mieka_writes July 5 2009, 19:56:03 UTC
and I can agree with that.. something that traumatic would make a shift like that not only reasonable but sensible as protection...

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gabbyleeloo August 14 2009, 10:18:45 UTC
I adored this! It was simple and brilliant. And it's nice seeing John/Yassen, it's so hard to find!

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jusmine984 August 17 2009, 04:51:22 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. :D

John/Yassen is a favorite of mine. I agree, it's far too rare! We need more more more of it!

Thanks for commenting. :)

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