Cognac

May 10, 2009 14:24

Author: Vampassassin
Title: Cognac
Summary: ... It’d taken years and years, but Yassen had finally gotten revenge, gratification in its finest form…
Rating: T. Swearing and violence.
Notes: Alternative to Ash’s fate in the series.
Word Count: 824

Cognac )

[author] vampassassin, [prompt] delayed gratification

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hpstrangelove May 11 2009, 12:59:59 UTC
Great use of the prompt; I enjoyed this very much.

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arithilim May 12 2009, 20:03:12 UTC
Very nice ^_^ I love the end. And it feels right that Yassen should be the one to take Ash out. I must say though, Yassen condemning Ash for his work seems a bit hypocritical, all considering.

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Vampassassin here! vampassassin May 14 2009, 11:15:19 UTC
Hello and many thanks to everyone who has commented here! I was hoping everyone would appreciate my interpretation of the prompt :D

But the whole Yassen condeming Ash thing... Well yes, it's hipocrasy to a certain degree. But Yassen condemning Ash for his work is also Yassen trying to generate a righteous desire for revenge, or to put it simply, Yassen's merely trying to think of how bad Ash is so that it's easier for him to pull the trigger.

Anyway, thankyou to all of you guys again, I can't say enough how you all make writing these things totally worth it :)

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emmi_loo May 12 2009, 21:58:28 UTC
I like it a lot. Never really thought of the Yassen/Ash dynamic... good going!

Emmy

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winoniel May 21 2009, 20:20:07 UTC
What a powerful take on the prompt. I really like how the delay is not only in the killing itself, but in Yassen's ability to react to it! And what a reaction! It's almost like he had not allowed himself to feel anything up until that point. Well done.

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luna_shovegood June 5 2009, 21:46:31 UTC
Oh, wow, that's really good.
I think I'm possibly a little bit disturbed by Yassen and his 'low, wild laughter with a hysterical edge' and his sadistic chuckle.
But it was deffinatly a really good take on the prompt

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