Delayed Gratification

[jusmine984]

-Title- Delayed Gratification
-Author- DreamsInBlackAndWhite
-Rating- To for Teen. References to sex but no actual sex.
-Summary- John's mind is on only one thing when he gets home. Helen, however, has a different idea.
-Word Count- 967

Comments

Aww

[emmi_loo]

I think I might melt :) I love these two together--it's so nice to write fluff, isn't it? And you did an excellent job of it. Great work!

Emmy (Emmy-loo from FF :P)

[agent_jet]

She almost wishes he was cheating on her instead because then she'd have a chance. She'd fight any woman on the planet for her John but what chance did she have against his country?

That has to be the best line/set of lines. Helen is so possessive and in love yet at the same time knows where the metaphorical line in the sand is.

[hpstrangelove]

I'm not big into het, but I really enjoyed this, so that says something about how well written it is.

[arithilim]

Aw, this is so perfect. I do feel bad for Helen though. It'd be a tough position to be in. And yay for the first story posted in this comm!