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Crying for the Moon - Anne Phoenix - Prompt: Full Moon

Sep 11, 2010 22:21

Title: Crying for the Moon
Author: annephoenix
Characters: Alex, Fenrir Greyback
Rating: R
Word Count: 1000
Summary: "Alex arched his back and tried to buck off his attacker but it was hopeless. He was trapped and without even a blade to defend himself, he stood no chance."
Warning(s): Werewolves
Author's Notes: Written for the flash-rider community’s challenge prompt ( Read more... )

[prompt] full moon, [author] annephoenix

Comments 8

loony_lucifer September 12 2010, 03:56:28 UTC

Wow, that was cool! Did a double take first (Alex? Greyback? wait, as in Rider, Alex? ....*dirty thoughts*) and then pretty much decided these two were meant for a story together. XD

annephoenix September 12 2010, 07:27:16 UTC

I will always have a soft spot for Fenrir, and who could resist the werewolf challenge? That said, I completely lacked inspiration due to other projects sucking my soul and it was only late last night, after watching Merlin, that the muse grabbed my fingers and started typing. Typed it all in one, read through it once and posted in the space of 1.5 hours. Proper Flash Fic!

hpstrangelove September 12 2010, 05:04:55 UTC

I did the same thing as Loony did - I couldn't sleep so thought I'd check out LJ since I hadn't been on all day. I had to look at that pairing twice because I was sure I wasn't reading it right.

Only you could pull this off! Great job - except I want to read the NC-17 version...

annephoenix September 12 2010, 07:28:23 UTC

I almost went for an NC-17 version, but felt it wouldn't flow as easily ... in under 1,000 words. Need 10,000 words for that one! Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!

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annephoenix September 12 2010, 07:29:05 UTC

I can't frikkin' WAIT for the Harry/Fenrir scenes in the movies. If they don't film them in graphic detail, I will be most disappointed!

kennahijja September 14 2010, 01:12:24 UTC

Omg, I swear I was floored by your character list alone :). Loved this! The small hints at a rather different future/world, the way Alex is knocked off his path before the pack even closes in on him, and omg, Greyback! I love you :). He's so deliciously evil, and I adored the 'catch you later' parting shot!

And Alex, al steadfast hero with a saviour complex, ready to turn round and go right into it again. His fear is so vivid, especially the way he doesn't give in to it...

(also, habit made me read tons of subtext into that, for obvious reasons *g*).

annephoenix September 15 2010, 16:50:25 UTC

Ooooh you read it :) I was starting to think no one liked werewolves. <3

Hopefully expect email from me tonight or tomorrow morning. Have just been soooo insanely busy. I think I should not take on any more duties of any type ... unless it's Harry/Lucius hahaha ...

kennahijja September 15 2010, 23:34:38 UTC

Heh, it's pretty obviously a congregation of Potterfans 'round here ;).

No hurry - I'm still owing you one too :). And things are pretty damn mad at my end as well...