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Fic: Poets Come To Life

Jan 07, 2008 22:00

Title: Poets Come To Life. (3/3)
Rating: MA-15.
Fandom: Bandom. P!atd. FOB. THS. (Brendon/Ryan, Pete/Patrick, implied Spencer/Pete, Spencer/Ryan, Spencer/Greta, past-Pete/Ashlee)

( “You’re sorta beautiful,” Brendon says. “And I say that like, totally superficially.” )

the country inside my head, the hush sound, panic at the disco, bandom, fall out boy

Comments 71

lastyearsdream January 7 2008, 17:55:37 UTC

Oh. Wow.

I read all three parts at once and only realised at the last sentence that I couldn't remember the last time I'd breathed.

Amazing. ^_^

flash_indie January 8 2008, 22:22:58 UTC

Thank you so much. ^^

x_smartie January 7 2008, 22:03:49 UTC

This story, it was, oh my, it was.
I just. This was, biting my lip and feeling tears prickle in the corner of my eye and that sweet painful ache (all, long and drawnout like a string) in my chest, in my heart, and slow slide drip of paint, and. Pete, hand gripping tight and Ryan, with his company and the bodies, and. And.

I don't even know what I'm saying. It doesn't even make sence.

I. God.

It was twisted and strange and real, and so, so, so.
I don't know what I'm trying to say.

It's been, years since anything I read moved me this much. I.

My back aches, from sitting in one place with it too straight, because once I started reading, I don't think I moved. I certainly can't relaxErm ( ... )

flash_indie January 8 2008, 22:26:57 UTC

Oh. *blinks*

Just, wow. Thank you. Thank you so, so much. Comments like this always leave me not knowing how to reply (in a good way though) and I just. Thank you. Thank you for reading and finding the time to comment and actually letting it affect you in such a way. Thank you.

PS. Do I recognise your name from the Horrors fandom, or am I just retarded?

x_smartie January 8 2008, 22:44:43 UTC

:)
You are so welcome, really. It was the least I could do after reading it, because, yeah. :)

Also, yhup, I am in the Horrors Fandom, innit (totally using gratuitous hors icon now, lol).
I've never been regognised before. Heh :D

hatoyona January 7 2008, 22:04:42 UTC

This was absolutely breathtaking! Incredible job, really.

flash_indie January 8 2008, 22:28:14 UTC

Thank you so much.

xdesaparecidos January 7 2008, 23:02:31 UTC

I just... I... wow. This is absolutely spectacular. I'm pretty much speachless, and how ironic... breatheless.

Confession time I think I've been forgetting how to live, and this helped me remember. The line of It’s about, and this, maybe it’s a revelation, a realisation, life, being alive, it’s about giving a shit. Just, wow. It's about giving a shit. I'm pretty sure people forget that alot in the quest to live.

Memd for sure.

flash_indie January 8 2008, 22:30:14 UTC

*blushblushblush*
Thank you so much.

new_evolution January 8 2008, 00:55:21 UTC

Oh. Wow.

Yeah, I'm sort of crying right now. This is just incredibly beautiful and I love your characterization so much (especially Patrick) and, just, oh.

flash_indie January 8 2008, 22:21:27 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^