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Fic: Grace - Chapter 17 (part 2)

Jun 29, 2007 17:42

Title: Grace - Chapter 17 (part 2)
Rating: M
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

( “He wanted to drink himself back to life,” Ryan continues, and he leans back on the bench, looks me straight in the eye for maybe the first time in forever. “But instead he drank himself to death.” )

the country inside my head, grace, panic at the disco, bandom

Comments 65

tip_painter June 29 2007, 15:43:59 UTC

My God. Seriously. What the hell. Just... Duddette! With ten gazillion stupid exclamation marks. JUST. asdfdgfhj!!!!!! HOW do you write like that? Where do you get those breathtaking (literally) ideas from? I've said this before and I'm saying it again: this is amazing, you are amazing.

I never read fanfiction anymore because 99% of it sucks and it doesn't do anything for me. The only thing I get out of it is things I already know. But THIS! OMG. You use philosophy. Imagery. Metaphors. Plot. So many awesome things. The last line, I mean, HOLY SHIT.

Do the world a favor and become a professional writer. Thanks.

OH! Right, uhm, mind if I add you? 'Cause I like, I NEED to. I'll die from emoness if your name isn't on my F-list.

flash_indie July 1 2007, 22:29:55 UTC

Thank you so much!

The whole reason I started writing in the first place was because so much of the fanfiction around sucked and I kinda wanted to read what was in my head, but well, for that to happen I had to write it. Does that make sense? Point is, I know there's a lot of shit, but there's a lot of good stuff too. You just end up having to dig a helluva lot deeper. I like, have this policy where I read the first two paragraphs and if I don't like it by then I don't read it. *shrug* I don't know. I have the same policy for novels.

Again, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

You don't need to ask to friend! *is flattered* I'll add you back if you want.

tip_painter July 1 2007, 22:41:18 UTC

You are welcome!

Seriously? I did that, too. I have these wonderful things in my head and I want people to write exactly that, but then again, nothing is as perfect as in your imagination. Your policy is interesting. I do a similar thing, only I'm acting like a snotty quality-addict. If the first line isn't something extraordinarily brilliant I won't even read past it.

AND YES. ADD ME! *clings*

subatomicautumn June 29 2007, 16:08:41 UTC

wow. this is just so amazing.
everything in it just feels so real
and oh man. it's beautiful!

flash_indie July 1 2007, 22:53:12 UTC

Thank you so much! ^^

donottestme June 29 2007, 16:29:59 UTC

That was beautifully depressing. I don't know. That probably sounds bad, but this was real good. Ryan's scared I believe.

flash_indie July 1 2007, 22:54:46 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

<3 You old_plain_me June 29 2007, 17:06:07 UTC

"Ryan says I get bored of people, but I don’t.

They get bored of me, and I leave them before they can figure that out."

This, made me cry. And love you even more. Still, I don't know how you do it. Every word, and metaphor and every single thing is PERFECT. You have no idea how much I love your talent. You are the most unique amazing writer. Iloveyou!

Re: <3 You flash_indie July 1 2007, 22:58:13 UTC

Loveyoutoo ^^.

Thank you so, so much *hugs*.

xcandyxninjax June 29 2007, 17:10:54 UTC

Eeeee! WOW *___*

This story is so amazing... it always gets me thinking...
And just when I get annoyed with Brendon or Ryan, or both, lines like those last two come up and they change everything.

Keep writing beautifully, even if does take you awhile to update, I guess xD

<3333

flash_indie July 1 2007, 22:59:25 UTC

Thank you so much.

Next chapter is done! (it's the last part as well!) so hopefully update shall be sooner rather than later, hm? ^^