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Fic: Grace - Chapter 16

May 20, 2007 11:49

Title: Grace - Chapter 16 (Part 1)
Rating: M
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)
( Me, I’m catatonic, some wayward coma-patient that escaped the hospital only to sit unconscious. Blood is staining my nails, my skin, as I sit there with my heart in my hands. )

the country inside my head, grace, panic at the disco, bandom

Comments 3

tenfiftythree July 2 2007, 21:42:26 UTC

i may just love you for this. this part of the chapter... it made me realize something about my best friend. and i'm not sure it was the idea you were trying to give off, but when the person you know you love, but you say you hate them because of the things they've done to themselves and to you, when they end up dead, you can't help but to love them as a whole... i don't know how to say what i'm trying to say. but this made my cry so hard. and i wasn't sure why, but my eye's have been closed to why i couldn't tell him that i loved my best friend. that i loved him because he knew how to be strong when he needed to and weak when he didn't. and you've opened my eyes to it. so, thank you.

you captured every emotion so well. you're an amazing writer.

tigermatinee July 18 2007, 02:22:00 UTC

This is absolutely the most beautiful short story I've ever read. Every sentence goes directly to my heart...I can't remember the last time I cried as I read, but this is definitely one of those stories.
Wow.
Please, never stop writing. You have an absolute gift.

anicsi July 29 2011, 11:12:33 UTC

Oh God ;_______;