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Grace - Chapter 12

Feb 25, 2007 15:20

Title: Grace - Chapter 12 (part 2)
Rating: M
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

( A thousand nurses have stolen Catherine from me, stolen my white rabbit and left me sitting here with her broken clock. Tick! it goes, and it’s too slow, too desperate and strained in its timing, the second hand is moving in hours. )

the country inside my head, grace, panic at the disco, bandom

Comments 92

stolen_manners February 25 2007, 09:20:55 UTC

Can I be honest with you ( ... )

flash_indie February 26 2007, 06:56:18 UTC

Wow *blinks*, fantastic comment. ^^

Uh, one of the reasons it might have been a little off in the start, is because well, not only have I been under unbearable amounts of stress the past couple of weeks, but a lot of the content in this chapter hits a little close to home. Just, the stuff with Catherine, I guess.

Eheh, I'm glad everything started to set in and stuff, fall into place. So happy you enjoyed. Thank you so much for the brilliant comment, thank you for reading in the first place. ^^

PS. I didn't realise that I'd linked to the second part of the chapter on s!atd, so, uh, if you've just read this, there's another part that comes before. If you just go onto my journal, it's like, three entries down...(Sorry about that)

stolen_manners February 26 2007, 19:06:40 UTC

Ohgodohgodohgod!

Oh. God.
I think I'm hyperventilating!

I just read the first part (and the second part again), and everything fell into place. Just. Woah.

I still stand by what I said about it feeling different (not good, or bad... just different, y'know?) but getting the first part definitely helped it click into place.
I guess I sorta felt 'off' because I had this feeling that there were things I didn't get, but I should've got? Yeah. The 'tick goes the clock'-part annoyed me a little at first, because it seemed out of place and sorta raw and I didn't quite understand what it was good for? 'Cause I (can't stress the fact that I) love the imagery you put in, and the references both to universal stuff and stuff from previous chapters. I'm a sucker for stuff like that and you're so great at it. That was probably why it felt so off to me, seeing that I didn't understand why you put it in. But after reading part 1 and the Alice-reference I get it. And I'm so happy that I get it. I'm grinning like an idiot actually. It makes this ( ... )

flash_indie February 27 2007, 00:28:14 UTC

Ahah, I'm glad it all fell into place a little better. ^^

Again, just, thank you so much! You are far too wonderful, and yeah, more soon hopefully!

rock_my_town February 25 2007, 09:37:47 UTC

Wow. I can't....I can't form words. The things, the emotions, everything you're doing with this story just leaves me speechless. I'm feeling so so so overwhelmed from the intensity of this chapter and I need more. AH this story is a drug. Amazing. Can't get enough...

flash_indie February 26 2007, 06:24:53 UTC

Thank you so much! ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying it. *hugs*

PS. I didn't realise that I'd linked to the second part of the chapter on s!atd, so, uh, if you've just read this, there's another part that comes before. If you just go onto my journal, it's like, three entries down...(Sorry about that)

lotrnhp4eva February 25 2007, 10:54:13 UTC

Wow... I know I keep writing the same comments over and over again, but this story just has me enthralled. I don't know if you are aware of what an incredible writer you are, but wow... I just get goosebumps whenever I read your stories and I can't describe in words the power you hold over my emotions. You are amazing...
♥

flash_indie February 26 2007, 06:25:59 UTC

*blush* Thank you so much, just, yeah, I'm so happy that all of you are enjoying this so much. *totally flattered*

PS. I didn't realise that I'd linked to the second part of the chapter on s!atd, so, uh, if you've just read this, there's another part that comes before. If you just go onto my journal, it's like, three entries down...(Sorry about that)

oui_mu_sissu February 25 2007, 11:44:04 UTC

honeslty cant find the right words to express how this chapter made me feel...so ill think about it for a while and get back to you.
all i'll say is:
WHOLEYMOLEYITWASGOOD!

and also, last time i comment this i was talking to you about the FOB concert, Take 21 are opening, local brissy band...eh there better be another support as well...

flash_indie February 26 2007, 06:29:00 UTC

Ahah, thank you so much! ^^

And, and, and Take 21...okies, never heard of them, but fingers crossed they'll be good, yeah? Do you know them?

I heard a rumour that the Sneaky Sound System was supporting, but I'm kinda in the process of hoping that was just a rumour. I dunno.

PS. I didn't realise that I'd linked to the second part of the chapter on s!atd, so, uh, if you've just read this, there's another part that comes before. If you just go onto my journal, it's like, three entries down...(Sorry about that)

oui_mu_sissu February 26 2007, 06:31:28 UTC

i dont know take 21...but my step sister does. they only graduated last year to.
i dont really like them to be honest, and im really hoping theres another support as well.
i really hope sneak sound isnt supporting...really dotn like them!

ohh i only read that part...ill go read the first part and then that part again.

flash_indie February 27 2007, 00:05:57 UTC

I don't really like the Sneaky Sound System either, it's just...I dunno, not my taste really.

Fingers crossed there'll be another good support act though.

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kthxrawr February 25 2007, 12:00:29 UTC

Oh, wow. I love this. The occuring clock is just some kind of fantastic. ♥

kthxrawr February 25 2007, 12:00:51 UTC

reoccuring even, sorry.

flash_indie February 26 2007, 06:29:52 UTC

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed.

PS. I didn't realise that I'd linked to the second part of the chapter on s!atd, so, uh, if you've just read this, there's another part that comes before. If you just go onto my journal, it's like, three entries down...(Sorry about that)