as if you'd just woke up (glee, r, rachel/jesse)

[flash_indie]

this meme is a+

Comments

[saytemptation]

I love Jesse and this is perfect. Thanks for sharing :)

[flash_indie]

thank you! and you're welcome. :) i really like jesse too, i was hoping that him and rachel would get a better conclusion than they did, but oh well.

[anonymous]

That was gorgeous. Please write something, anything else with this pairing.

"she follows with lost intentions and a new dress" - perfection. Love the tone of this, just... wow.

[flash_indie]

thank you so much. they're an interesting pairing, so i probably will end up writing more. :)

[crazy_thought]

he tone of this was amazing. you must write more st. berry!!

[flash_indie]

thanks so much! i do plan to hopefully write some more. they're a great pairing to write.

This is a little nitpicky

[anonymous]

But how can Rachel have bought a new dress and have her shirt off in the same scene. Continuity errors bother me.

Re: This is a little nitpicky

[flash_indie]

lol, no, thank you for pointing it out! i've fixed that up. i don't get my shorter stuff beta'd so i miss things sometimes. thanks. :) hope you enjoyed it anyway.

[pippazx]

You sound very poetic when you write! I really like the concept of Rachel and Jesse, "beyond Vocal Adrenaline and New Directions..." I really liked the bit about Rachel going home and scrubbing her hair. Good fic! :]

[flash_indie]

Thank you so much. :) I like the idea of them post-school choirs as well, because I feel like those are the two that would end up on broadway together, whether they liked it or not.