Appetite (Chapter 15)

Nov 07, 2008 09:49


Title: Appetite
Main pairings: Rafael Nadal/Novak Djokovic, David Ferrer/Andy Murray, Carlos Moya/Tommy Haas
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Tommy finds it difficult to leave Carlos' place when David and Rafael are left behind while their boyfriends made it to the Masters Cup.
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appetite, tennis slash

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flamyshine November 7 2008, 15:27:28 UTC

Aww, thanks for the ever so lovely comment! :D Actually, I'm going to Shanghai for the Masters Cup, yay!! *superhugs*

I personally had trouble picturing a lazy Haas so I made him pretend to be lazy XD Well, there is always a tomorrow for shower fun but I guess the busy doctor might not have an opening tomorrow, so poor Carlos had to choose doctor > shower fun XD Yeah, I wonder where the word "Carlossing" came from, ahahaha.

Did you just say you wanted to hug Rafa? :D Aww, that's so sweet. Too much thinking and no talking is the fastest way to shake a relationship, in my opinion, other than cheating of course.

And, apparently, Andy was too busy admitting that he was pretty and Ferru was too busy drooling over Andy's texts to realize earlier that they could just call each other XD This series is already too slow for my taste, so I'm really sorry for those who have to be even more patient for the next chapter :) Thanks for the review!! *superhugs*

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carolina30363 November 7 2008, 19:23:48 UTC
great fic...loved every chapter

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flamyshine November 7 2008, 21:08:29 UTC

Aww, you always give me this warm feeling with your words. Thank you :)

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slyreflection November 20 2008, 21:54:09 UTC
Awwww I love the Tommy/Carlos fluff so much hee. :D
Why is it that the older Spaniards are always the responsible ones in relationships, no matter the actual ages XD?
Hee the four of them... Brit!Andy/Ferru getting Nadjoko to talk LMAO...THEY'RE SO CUTE ^^.
*Huggles* :)

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flamyshine November 21 2008, 16:25:58 UTC

Boy, I really like writing fluff, don't I? XD Who knew I'd get to write such a rare couple as Carlos/Hasi? Ah, the surprise of life :D

I can't help to wonder about the same question as you! Spanish guys must consider responsibility as one of the top values!

I'm slowly getting used to writing the foursome (don't laugh! It's a very appropriate word in this case) but I'm slowly wrapping up the story XD How sad is that TT Thank you for the comments when I know how busy you are! I really appreciate the gesture, thanks :D *superhugs*

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jeu_set_match November 20 2008, 23:39:24 UTC
Extra late comment, sorry T_T

PICSPICSPICSPICS

Ok, where can I buy one of those "Carlossing mornings"? I'm ready to pay great money for that XD
As usual, Carlos/Tommy is very sweet and domestic ^^. I can so imagine Carlos opening the bathroom dorr to see if Tommy is doing what he's supposed to be doing XD


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jeu_set_match November 20 2008, 23:42:29 UTC
SORRY! here is the last HSP -_______-

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flamyshine November 21 2008, 16:53:40 UTC

Ahahahaha! I can't stop laughing at Carlos and his apron XDDD It's so pink and so cute XDD *dies laughing* Cooking is serious business. No one messes with food!! You really got to draw him like Carlos. He's definitely different from the other Spaniards now. Yay!! Your HSPs are evolving! :D

And, about that "Carlossing morning", well, someone named Tommy Haas has the exclusive rights of it at the moment and he doesn't like to share. I guess you'll have to stick with your Marat 2000 for the time being Ah, Rafa and Ferru sitting together on that couch (ouch, you had to draw another couch, but hey, it looks great! Just like the one that would be in Ferru's place, no? SpongeBob colors well used :D) And, SpongeBob kink to bed? That sounds like a whole new level of kink even if I can't even imagine what's involved XD ( ... )

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