Appetite (Chapter 12)

Oct 17, 2008 21:47


Title: Appetite
Main pairing: Rafael Nadal/Novak Djokovic
Other characters: Ferrer, Moya, Ferrero, Safin, Kohlschreiber
Rating: NC-17 (mild)
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Novak finds a way to get some honest answers in a pleasurable way while David misses Andy. Juan Carlos gets an unexpected call and ( Read more... )

appetite, tennis slash

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flamyshine October 18 2008, 06:37:48 UTC

Scary CAPS LOCKED letters XD Don't worry, Hasi hasn't lost his memories and it won't happen in the future either. I just had to make Carlos fly to him. Ah, that stubborn Spaniard *cough*

Well, at least Ferru managed to provide a pen and a paper at the end so Carlos could write down vital information *pats him on the head too*

Aww, honestly, I thought it was ok to stop there. Never really expected such intense reaction XDD The next chapter would have to start with Hasi then^_^ *superhugs*

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flamyshine October 18 2008, 06:41:00 UTC

Ouch, you're probably right. Novak should've never eaten Nutella off Rafa XD How stupid am I to write that XDD Ah, he's doomed now. No cure possible *cough*

Juanqui should better hope that this time, his plan works. Otherwise he'll be doomed too. Well, Carlos couldn't possibly kill him, could he...?

Carlos/Tommy should be the very first scene in the next chapter^_^ *superhugs*

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jeu_set_match October 18 2008, 17:27:42 UTC
OH WOW THAT SCENE @/////@


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flamyshine October 19 2008, 09:30:44 UTC
Wow, so even Ap. gets your lovely drawings. Aww, this is why I can't stay blue at all ^______________________^ *superhugs ( ... )

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jeu_set_match October 19 2008, 17:00:06 UTC
You have no idea how thankful I am to the HSP for not having certain body parts. (LOL just realized that they're living in the nude 24/7)
It's funny because 1 month ago i'd have rather eat my own fist than draw Nole's hair, and now I don't mind it anymore ^^.

I love that awesome unexpected smiley. He gets me every single time XDDD. And yeah, I'll admit I like it a little too much when Juan Carlos abuses Marat.

I lol'd at you calling Pics "Pics" ahahaha. I hope I'll never catch you making a typo and having Andy call him "Pics" bwahahahahaha.

And from what I've read, if I could chose a house to live in in APP- verse, I'd live with Carlos. His house must be so cosy ^___^.

Ahaha don't jinx yourself, even if I'm sure I have nothing to do with you not having writer's block. *pictures herself in Aladdin's genie's costume* *dies*

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carolina30363 October 18 2008, 23:06:37 UTC
i really adore your plotting Janqui...and your fic is a jewel

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flamyshine October 19 2008, 09:16:43 UTC

Oh dear, I don't deserve such a wonderful word :) You're very kind and I'm glad you like Juanqui in here *giggles*

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slyreflection October 24 2008, 01:06:20 UTC
XD XD XD
Oh, oblivious Ferru ahaha! He definitly doesn't want to know what he was interrupting.
(You know what amuses me way too much? Nutella is made by Ferrero. ROFLMAO. Ahh the crack. Especially in this context. Rafa + Nole + Juanqui... erm... products BWHAHAHAHA!!!)
Oh, Juanqui. You insane devious Spaniard. I like the random Kohlschreiber connection.. but Arda OTP gets crazier by the day XD. Juanqui better hope Hasismut puts Carlos in a really, really, REALLY good mood... or maybe he should consider moving to that safehouse in Russia permanetly.
Juan Carlos thought that in this case, the end justified the means.
MACHIAVELLI!JUANQUI.
OWN.
This calls for Devious!Juanqui icon.
:D
XD
*SUPERHUG*

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flamyshine October 24 2008, 08:53:41 UTC

I know! Ferrero made that Nutella! XD Isn't it an awesome coincidence? *giggles*

I had to put Kohli in because I couldn't find any other decent German players. At first, I thought about Kiwi but figured that he could punch Carlos in the face XD So I chose Kohli who seems to have a better temper :)

Yes, Juanqui risked a lot for plotting this time. If Carlos doesn't get what he want in Tommy's room, Juanqui might have to suffer from strawberries flying at his face XD And, I think it was the perfect timing to use that devious icon XDD *superhugs*

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