FairyTaleFic - Music Pedder - END

[flametwirler]

When she came looking for him two days after his late night visit he was waiting for her, new gift in hand. She was smiling as she strode up to him, an inner spark to her, a bit of defiance, that had been missing from her step since they’d reunited. It made him wonder what had happened during her time away from him.

First things first though.

Comments

[eldrfire]

Ooh great! Good story.

It's tough to deal with issues of pride and philanthropy and stuff like that. But I think it worked out well.

I liked this part:

“A kiss?” he repeated, smiling so softly under his mask that she missed it entirely.

It was very nice. :) Good job and good luck on the contest.

[beyondthemoor]

I love how well you developed things! :D Very smoothly done!

[zelha]

*happy sigh*

Seriously, this made me all warm and fuzzy. :3