[Fanfic]RomanoxSpain (The Paella's Secret Recipe)

[flamefox324]

Title: The Paella's Secret Recipe (Part 1)
Author: flamefox324
Characters/Pairings: SpainxRomano (mentioning of Germany/Italy)
Ratings: PG-13
Warnings: Profanities in both English and Italian, sex (coming up), grammar mistakes
Summary: Spain came back from his grocery shopping when suddenly Romano visited his house. The Spaniard offered him his

Comments

[caska_langley]

Ahah, so cute, can't wait for moar <3 (can't wait for sex indeed)
Can I ask you where are you from? I can find a couple of little mistakes in italian, if you want I can help you to fix them :D

[flamefox324]

I was actually born in England but I lived mostly in Italy. I think I only lived there for at least 7 years before I moved out.

Though I'm not surprised if I made small mistakes for writing in Italian. xD -snorts- It kind of happens when someone doesn't practice their language a lot or gets mixed up with another one.

I bet one of the mistakea was on the "culos". It should be changed to "culi" right if I wanted to write in plural form.

I had Spanish and Italian mixed up again while I was writing the story. ^^; Is there any more mistakes?

[whoa_nevermind]

(it's caska-langley from another accunt!)

ahah, don't worry, I think it's obvious, I've studied english but since I can't talk or write it for months everytime it's like I've forgotten it over and over again.
yeah, one's 'culi' and the other one is "Maledetto a quel brutto patatone!"
"Patatone" it's like a fluffly way to say "...ok, you're not smartest ball on the xmas tree, but I still love you", ahah. I think you were searching for something like "grossa patata".

btw I envy you so much for knowing so many languages! I hope I can study in England next year couse I can't wait to escape from Italy xD" (and I want to translate my fics too, ahah)

[flamefox324]

Really? Pffft. xD I really wasn't sure if "patatone" was an existed word but I wrote it anyways like a "made-up" word for "big potato". Thought it would be a much funnier word than "grossa patata".

Thanks anyways. x3

I learned lots of languages since my dad is a diplomat. So I get to be moved at least 7 times in my entire life. He's also Italian. ^^

[madchad92]

Amo a Romano y España!!X33

omg!!I cant wait for part 2!!

I really like this fic,I love stories with details,your writing style is awesome,I love the details of the places and food,and the personalities of the characters are just perfect!!

Dammit!I want to eat paella so badly now D:

[flamefox324]

Hehe. También yo! ^^

I know. I seriously got hungry while I was writing this. xD I was like, "Damn, if only I'm at home, I would be eating paella (and pasta as well) at this instant @.@;". x);;

[tuulensisko]

kljhiozvh.lhgg :''''DD ♥♥♥♥

Those two are seriously the cutest pair ever. Bawww this fic is so adorable. I love the random Italian and Spanish too, even though I don't really speak either. I can't wait for continuation.

[flamefox324]

Thank you. :'D
The Part 2 would be probably be done on Saturday. ^^ Think it would be done in about 2-4 pages at least. x)

[aoinu99]

looking forward to saturday!!!!!! xDDDDDD
i really love this. fulfilling my craving for spain/romano.

[neko6]

weeeeeee adoro leer fics de estos dos aunque mi ingles es bananero

Esperaré esa continuación con porn XD

Por cierto al principio creia que España le habia echado marihuana a la paella XDDDDDD

Por cierto me gusto mucho ^^

[flamefox324]

Ya acabo de terminar de escribir la segunda parte. 8D Desfrutes! ^^