I did get my story finished last night - I think I was mostly asleep writing the last parts, so I reread it this morning to see how it ended.
The
Berrigan challenge is live! Go read! This is my story:
Go lookingJC goes looking for inspiration love in all the wrong right places.
Coming soon to a livejournal near you: drabbles!
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You set this beautiful mood. It's like you set out to light a set, and you're just so good at it, that I never doubt the source of the light, or even wonder or worry where it's coming from. It's just sure, and there, and good.
You don't write down to anyone, not the reader nor the characters. You don't explain everything until you're good and ready to, but neither do you ever drag things out beyond their fresh sale date and get annoying with it.
Your dialogue? *Guh*. Impressive enough when you had four seasons of televised tv shows to work from, but how you're nailing hip 20-year-old-boy speak? I don't know. But they always sound real.
There's more of course, there's mango sorbet, but I'll stop here. ;-)
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Seriously, thank you very much. You give me something to try to live up to. :)
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