noelliex // At the Top of Your Lungs

Jan 17, 2010 01:58

Title:
At the Top of Your Lungs
Author:
noelliex @ heartbreakblue
Pairing:
junsu/zhang liyin
Rating:
pg-13
Word Count:
~1600
Summary: The world is just a song. That's what you tell yourself.

i love the tone in this and how you can almost feel how fragile things seem. despite being in second person pov, it doesn't read like a self-insert at all and is well-written. each section leaves a little ache in your heart, and the very last line hits home incredibly well.

# paintspace, rating: pg-13, genre: angst, @ straight sunday, het: junsu, length: oneshot

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