[Fic] Summer Camp: Holding Out Part 2

[fivedayslater]

Title: Holding Out - Part 2: First Aid
Characters: England, America, Hungary, Austria, mentions of Canada
Rating/Warnings: PG-13. Sorta X-men-universe crossoverish kinda sorta except I call 'mutants' 'supers' so maybe The Incredibles crossoverish kinda sorta? Point is, some people have superpowers. And it's a pseudo-police state. Mild Language.

Comments

[8bit_oj]

Aw, kissing booboos is so cute <3

And man, I think stories with super-powered people (I mean comics, books, fanfiction, whatever) are predisposed to make your heart break. Yours has mine! I feel so sorry fo rAlfred and Arthur both.

[fivedayslater]

The only way it could be cuter is if there was a cat in the scene somewhere. :3

They tend to do that don't they? I mean recently; 50s comic book heroes were more save the day->save the girl->everyone goes home happy. Thank you very much! <3

[monochrome_flat]

This is a really cute idea! Arthur is so sweet in this, and poor Alfred, searching for Mattie. (Invisibility really is an appropriate power for him, but with what Arthur said I kinda doubt he escaped.) :'(

And wow, you managed to include the first aid theme! <3

Though things are fine now, I'm afraid things will repeat history and Alfred will rebel, and Arthur's parents death will end up being caused by supers...

[medev]

this story really catched my atention. is developing so nice :) now I'm wondering is arthur is a super too...with the fact that he doesn't remember the day his parents were killed >.< maybe I'm just over reacting lol
anyway. great chap!! looking forward for the next.

[fivedayslater]

Thank you! No, Arthur won't be a Super, but well, you'll see. ;)

[fivedayslater]

Thank you! He'll find him eventually...

I did! I'm very proud of myself for keeping up so far. :D

[salmonme]

I really like how the story is going. It's sweet and sad at the same time. Aw, and now I want to see Alfred find Mattie! Though the last line makes me bite my nails cuz it makes me think something bad will eventually happen between them that makes Arthur regret caring for him. (And isn't that the way these stories always go?)

[fivedayslater]

Thank you very much! He'll find him eventually. :) Maybe he will, maybe he won't. :D?

[phox99]

This so cute!!!!!!

[fivedayslater]

Thank you!! <3